Reborn As Kid Naruto

lovely fantasy story .....nice ...........?

I don't write review, but this one is especially good. new kind of story than the usual Xiantian novel. did not even noticed that had i finish 20 chapters. strongly recommend to read if you like ghost story.....just don't read it in the dark by yourself....

The novel feels pretty original and well translated. I like the plot as well as the progression so far. I Will continue to read as see how it goes.

Pretty good start for a novel. Looking forward for more                                                                                                     

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Yeet!!! I noticed some errors in grammars but nah!!! Even Grammarly and a little proofreading will remedy those!!! Story Development and pacing is just right, I think? The pacing got rushed after the 5th Chapter though. Fast-paced is different from rushed. Don't be excited to write your thoughts, that's where almost all writers rushes their works. My past work is just like that too???. Just like what Webnovel says when you're about to write, Just keep calm and write. Don't be excited or too fired up. Character designs is good and explorative, also imaginative. I quiet envy your imagination, haha. All in all this has potential, keep up the good work!!!