I thought it would be the only good thing this week... I was completely wrong. a waste of a good idea, but there are people who like everything, even that. (This is horrible, the guy seems obsessed with this "Delia") ....
So... it may seem like a typical isekai story on the surface, but then, I can sense that there are some unique spins on this genre. Being reborn in a game that's about to end its service seems like a nice touch. I can't wait to see how this will all unfold.
So people in the reviews are saying that they dont have a clue abt whats going on and i can relate to that ever since the second chapter. Its just very confusing. The story feels all over the place and its just too much. I thought maybe i just wasnt paying attention but thats not the case bc of the other reviews i saw.
The story doesnt look bad its just written a bit poorly.
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this a great story which is fun to read.... if you are reading reviews to check whether to read or not so just give it a shot. I promise you that u won't regret...[img=recommend]
I am SCREAMING where has this book been please?! I love the MC because he is so far from a 2D character design; The writing holds actual presence, an actual person in these words with a rawness of a really great character build and almost ensured potential. I can’t wait!!
There are good aspects of this novel and then there are bad as well, though the bad will start to heavily tilt the balance of the scale after a few hundred chapters. The writing quality and/ or translation is the highlight of this novel, the author has taken the time to pack in information, as well as constant world building into the story in addition to the lengthy chapters. The author is also a little more creative with the cultivation system and while, it does not venture off too much from your typical system, the author is more in-depth with explanations as well as giving each minor realm its own unique, innovative touch. Each minor realm of the cultivation system has a reason to exist and slowly, but surely builds a logical foundation over time that ties into the power the cultivation system grants each character. There are also unique elements to the story that I find creative and fun, such as the various side characters that are parodies of your typical Xiaxia protagonist or the constant countdown towards the MC's doom that pushes his cultivation vs. the typical "I want power over my own fate" trope. If I had to summarize the bad, it would have to be that the novel is directionless, slow pacing and in relation to that, too much filler. The author has, without a doubt, thought out their power system. After that though, is where the novel loses a lot of readers because it gives the feeling that the author had a great idea for the power system but didn't have much in terms of story and plotting, constructing a weak and mediocre story around a solid foundation. There is too much filler and you end up reading thick, convoluted chapters that does not push the needle forward much in the grand scheme of things, spending upward of 30 to 50 chapters to stretch stuff out. There is not much progress with the MC in terms of cultivation and while the beginning of the novel makes you believe that you know what kind of character he is, he will then later mellow out and become quite generic and quite frankly, cowardly. I would argue that this novel is more about the MC building up a faction + kingdom building in all honesty, which isn't something I was expecting this novel to turn into if you were to compare the beginning of the novel to now.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Interesting every chapter.i feel in love❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???? with the character.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???????? amazing story ????????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
2-dimensional characters, but the MC at least isn't a horn dog (at least not more than a certain degree, still acceptable). Other characters are fine but not too great. Story: Slice of life, OP, lazy MC tries not to get involved in saving the world but probably ends up saving it anyway.Nice World Background (typical Fantasy World), good Writing Quality.
I like how the characters are introduced ch 1 and the bonds between them. I also found the Kobe part funny- the writing is good and fleshed out well. The part with the nightmare (ch 3 I think) was rlly good with how the emotions were laid out and the monster
Even though I'm not a huge fan of this genre, the story's premise seemed intriguing and unusual. I'm hoping it performs as well as the other chapters. expecting more. Apart from that, the plot looks to have some promise. I'll keep an eye on it while keeping it in my back pocket to see if anything changes. It's not, however, my cup of tea.I recommend it to anyone who is interested in this genre. The story is compelling and shows promise. It may be delivered in a more potent way.
I can tell that this is not a simple story. The character is deep and every chapter is exciting. Looking forward to see the story development.