This is one of the best story have read so far keep up the good work. i hope to see more chapters. it is amazing i recommend it for people to read it. i like how detail the book is so far
Story jumps from plot to plot and has very little build up of events or world. Grammar is good and I never fault a writer for updates, unless they make promises they don't keep.
Keep up the good work bella. I am liking this story. I started reading yesterday I can't wait to read more about this amazing story. As for the haters that you have I have 2 words for them Suck it
opppa. this is what I call an op FL. she kick ass. I am loving the face that it aint starting off slow. the amount of chapter being release is amazing as well keep up the good work
From the beginning to the ending this book is filled with chaos.
Plot: Very bad. Jumping from one style to another, no links between chapters, the only interest that i had “is the next chapter weirder?”.
No description of world, characters. Tons of unnecessary text, a lot of holes in plot and, of course, the worst setting i have ever seen.
