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This reads very much like a screenplay. I'd like to see author expands and add more than actions and dialogues.
Plot is intriguing and characters are interesting enough. The battle scene is exciting. Epic, I dare say.  The story's got a huge potential. So, a bit more muscle on the bone, and this would rake in stars and readers.

Didn't they already post this like 7 times already………?

I'd recommend staying away from this if you value your time and brain cells.

After reading this I've become dumberer.

I love this story dear!  And I also love this genre alot!! It's slow paced and interesting. But please use punctuation marks . It's very hard to understand the paragraphs. Thanks alot for the story.❤️☺️☺️☺️

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Definitely something different from what I've read before. Different in a good way!
Love the background, love the plot, and love the idea. Can't wait for more chapters!

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Hey there!

Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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This is just a shameless review from the author XD

First of all, this novel is my very first novel I ever made and the first work of writing that I ever write. I admit that the beginning of the novel had a very terrible storytelling and grammar, but trust me I'm trying my best to improve it and I already had as you could see my english is improving if you continue reading.

The first volume is an experiment, while the second volume is where the real thing is made (In my opinion). So I hope that you guys will at least read until tens of chapters before giving a harsh review.

And to explain it to you, the title is The King of Tricks and Magic is a way to describe the main character. Well, just like how other people will do in another world, the first volume tells about the story where the main character got curious about fighting at the another world since the real world is a place where it's peace and trying to perform magic in another world where magic is real is kinda weird, right? So I decide to build up the world building and the characters first before going there.

And to answer all of your questions, the main character will start showing his magic performance at the second volume but I can't say too much since it will become a spoiler.

Thanks for reading this shameless review from me guys :)

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There is actual science in this.
The MC doesn't go back in time just because of "feelings" and "I regret this!".
He actually modeled the timelines.
But that's not the best part of this story, it's the character interaction. The kids, his sister.
Highly recommended.

needs a bit more world building, maybe like a chapter zero to explain a tiny bit of background.  other than that I feel it's a.really good story, and had huge potential to be picked.