I've read up to 113 or so. There are grammar problems and some names are weird but nothing too major. The only real problem I have with it is that three chapters, so far, aren't in English at all.
First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First First
i do really like this story. yeah it start'swith a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
The author disappeared when we need him.Please UpdateNeed updatePlease come backPretty pleaseI need youI miss youI love you.Forever.
Really liked it. Its usually hard to find novels like this and its even harder to put down after finding one. Anyways, eagerly awaiting for new chapters.
[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really liked reading this and hope that you keep writhing more, i liked the part where he is grinding his skills...........................................
So a story about furries. And according to another review, likely to become harem. Welp, I was interested until I heard catgirl, then disgusted at haren. Wow.
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]Hmm
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
Nice one keep going .
This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
You have certainly piqued my interest
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!×!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jfurjrkrheiejrjrfenej2osirj2mdhdg