Gostei da lore do protagonista, a história tenta deixar claro que o MC embora tenha sua humanidade preservada ainda é um demônio, que pode e será brutal com qualquer ser que venha a tropeçar com o caminho dele, oque na minha opinião é foda.
Absurd story with cardboard characters that are (and i mean all of them) gunning for the "moron of the year" award.
I really tried to see if it get better by skimming large parts but it actually gets worse.
If reading about mentally defective people makes you feel better then this is a novel for you.
You have been forewarned. The sheer stupidity of the MC (and pretty much every character) might rub on you!
If you don't trust this review then all you have to do is sample the comments for a few chapters to understand that i did not overstate anything.
The rating is something like -5 but i posted 2 stars just so the review does not get blocked.
Why is this ranked so high up? This novel is nothing original and the MC is a terrible person. Literally gets rich and it's like it's nothing. MC is missing way too many brain cells and everywhere he goes he gets worshipped. Also the MC gets a girlfriend who had a crush on him since high-school then later on proceeds to cheat on her with multiple other women. One of the woman is a flight Attendant who he bumps into and at the end of the chapter sleeps with her when she even said herself she didn't offer herself when another rich person came before him. This is very clearly written by a misogynist who thinks women are just objects. He has twins fall for him when he stops a basketball from hitting them and they for no reason even after the MC doesn't talk to them for days turn die hard fans of him and are permanently loyal to him. Again, no reason at all.
If you wanna read about a brain dead MC with other bootlicking side characters who have no other qualities other than to raise the MCs ego and materialistic cardboard cutout women who are just there to sleep with him and drive mini cooper's then go ahead and read this.
the novel is quite good and enjoyable to read. but I gotta say that the world building is not quite there yet. It is quite confusing how each fraction in this novel operates due to its sudden introduction with little context. Sometimes I even wonder why the author even bothers to introduce them since it serves little purpose to the main protagonist. One little thing that bothers me is the names of the characters in this novel. Some seem to have their names from the European side and some from the China side which I think is quite inconsistent with the theme of cultivation or culture in the world.but overall if you can look past these flaws. It's still a good read.
From my personal view, it's a very good novel on its own, and I don't understand why the rating is much worse from what this novel deserved. As a reader I have a habit to read the review of the novel and it's greatly affect me in deciding to proceed reading that story or not. And as a fellow reader, I would really appreciate it that reviews being written is really based on the story for better or worse and not affected from outer influence. Thank you (♡˙︶˙♡)
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good grammar funny and cool story recommended to read for all the family
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Story is great. The author changed the events of HP so much just from the beginning that it made me very very interested.
Author's grammar is great. It's at the level that it may be approved by the proud grammar nazis.
Author's updates consistently. The author hasn't broken his(her?) vow of updating 2 chapters a day 5 times per week yet.
All in all this fanfic has the potential to be among the exceptional if author keeps the consistency, keeps learning and evolving his(her?) writing as the story progresses, and not be too greedy when he(she?) starts to monetizing the novel.
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I came across this book not so long ago and to be honest it is one of the best books I have ever read..Keep up the good writing skills dear author
Hey! This is my first novel.
Because English is not my native language, I am aware that I still have many shortcomings in grammar, writing techniques, and other areas.
I hope you guys still able to enjoy it!
Give me your feedback and comment on the shortcomings of my novel.
Thank you so much!