THE OVERLORD'S CRUEL REVENGE

Hello. I am Chillaxzy168 and this is my second book. A story based on love, betrayal and revenge. I hope you enjoy it. Please leave a review. Thank you.❤❤❤❤

The first couple chapters introduce too many named characters that seem to not be relevant till a fair bit later. Which makes it very hard to get a grasp on what is happening and sacrifices the chance to get more detail on a smaller set of characters. I immediately was less invested in any one of them. Especially because this happened right off the bat.

From the synopsis I was expecting the story to be starting near the end of the synopsis with a bit of extra information. The current state however, is that the at last chapter currently available (ch47) the progression is halfway through the 2nd sentence of the synopsis. Which means so far chapters only exist for what you already know will happen if you read that. This makes it a boring read so far, in my eyes, and should have been left as a brief prologue.

I do feel this has potential as the ideas seem to be there and the characters and worldbuilding seem to have been thought about, but its currently not there.

I saw you had a similar review so I tried to give explanations as to why I think this way.

This novel is just bland. Im dropping it.
Slow peace and mc who is really boring, story that follows so many characters(while being slow) make it feel more boring then it should be.
Since its free giving 4* but its more of a 3*.

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