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This is a good story. It was well written and I connected with John because the way you explained what he was doing and going through. This is definitely a good read if your into this genre! Keep up the good work!
SO far a Great read keep it up Zephy. I really like your style. hjuicvdbhsjlvfuislgfhdusi;lhvgfdjisghvjusilhfgjushvjidslghdkjsdkjsbgvklivgbxckbfdvnm,lbvhkjbvghk.lbrg hk.dfsbvhjdflsbv
the beautiful demon's queeennn huaaa, it make me scary to dream what happened if he marry with Nyimas. good luck beib i wait this story.
great start but the whole pretending to be a driver thing gets old fast and it just keeps happening, I feel like it held back the story progression and character development alot
At the first chapter I feel like there is no special feeling to this story and in the second chapter I feel like WoW this is great.also, since the first chapter I can see that you have a lot potential in writing because your writing skill is so good.
This is review for the first 36 chapters.
Barely introduced to the story but I’ll attempt a review. author mentioned the obvious comparisons to HP and sure there are some similarities but replaces the childishness with a bit more maturity.
We’re meeting some potentially interesting characters. We have the bones of world that could bring the story up a few levels. I’ve never really been a fan of a world where mere words were all that was needed to cast spells, but there isn’t enough story to determine the nuances of spell casting yet.
I’ll write a better review in 70 chapters
I like the MC and how unique he's written. Fascinating concepts and although he's a genius which can sometimes be an overused trope, this is done well in my opinion. Hope the author keeps writing!
An interesting book. If you are a fan of gods and goddesses then this is the book for you. though there are not many chapters yet so I'll be waiting for an update.
a bit marred by translation, this seems like a promising story. Read it in its native language if you can. The main problem with the translation is that it seems to translate words and phrases literally, rather than adapting them to English grammar and syntax.
Starts of a Lil sketchy with the topical mc bullying trope.
Gets better with every episode/chapter.
The mc seem a Lil bit scarred by the whole society of 2nd genders lacks confidence.
Premise of the book is fantastic and has great potential.
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disgusting and racist. don't read.
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disgusting and racist. don't read.
disgusting and racist. don't read.
