Yes but on this site not yet
Done reading this WN. What is good in the story is the value of giving importance to those around you. Actually, the story has a lot of moral lessons that you can take. There were many negative comments about this WN, which made me more interested in reading it. Some said the scene was predicatable. Dude, that's not true there are plot twists upto the end, you better continue reading. The ending of the story is very reasonable at the same time made you wonder if the author will make another story for the Talen Family. Overall this is very good story with good moral values to take.
Thank you JKSMANGGA
ps. RICHARD ENO who the h*ll are you? ?
Was it high in ranking?
so how is the novel??
What is the name of the magicians novel?
Update??
This was the first time I had read sm*t so, I won't be judging the novel that harshly. Lol
The Princess Wei Yang
Now that i'm at chapter 13, my curiosity only grows about how did Wang Yu and Musician met. Oh well, this type of novel is what my brain want to read now because it has op mc, good romance(maybe? Because based on what i'm seeing at the early chapter, it looks okay.) and interesting plot. Welp, i'm just into game/modern + martial arts/action tag right now that's why this novel got my interest in reading.
It's okay but the story variated so much It's loss It's main character backstory it deviated to so many unnecessary plots and the supporting roles doesn't have clear ending as to what occurs to them afterwards like they have been discarded as long as the main characters continue
This book is a great what if book. almost on the lines of Red Storm Rising by Tom Clancy. this has a lot of behind the scenes dialog and it ties a lot of the story together.
I enjoy when a story isn't rushed and when it's well written, and these certainly apply to this story. It is eloquently worded and it spends much time on describing the interactions between characters as well as the thoughts of the main character. These are both the book's greatest strenths and weaknesses in my opinion.
To illustrate this I will write two lines essentially describing the same thing:
-"He could not help but allow the lurking smile at the back of his mind grow on his face as he expressed the feeling his thoughts gave him"
-"He smiled at the thought"
I enjoy these lengthy descriptions... but not when the book is full of them. Most of the descriptions are like the first option, and I got tired of it pretty quickly. The phrase "could not help but" is also unnecessarily abused to an almost hilarious degree. While I certainly cannot fault the author on their english, I wish they would consider the time to use these dragged out ways to say things that could be short and concise.
Which brings me to my second point, the pacing. Dear lord is the pacing slow, which I also enjoy at times, but only if we get some action in between. Those who have read the book may be thinking "wasn't the monster wave enough action?" and to that I say, it should have been half as lengthy and have more fighting rather than pointless dialogue. Also, the monsters are literally only described as that, 'monsters'. Nothing is said about how the regular monsters look in the first couple of chapters of the fight.
I'd say, give the book a chance, those of the same opinion as me regarding pacing and language will quickly realize it isn't for them, and for the less picky, I believe you will enjoy it. It certainly isn't bad by any means, but I will not be reading more than 60 chapters of it.
Hope you can take some of the criticism to heart and improve author, flaws aside I think you have a good story in you.