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Interesting premise, great suspense and some really emotional moments.
Rant Valo, the MC, feels truly alive and his decisions are logical or at least understandable.
Good story, would recommend.
IS IT DROPPED ?
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Hey!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected]
We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
A great story so far I am amazed at how people haven't found about this yet. Someone needs to spam reviews on it.
Great work author keep up the good work and support will be there.
On a pure writing quality, I can say this easily matches translated novels and even exceeds some of them. The world building is good, and the story arcs are innovative (for a xianxia). The power itself is also unique enough that I haven't seen it before.Now the biggest problem by far that I have noticed is the pacing. We're at 400+ chapters but still technically on the first arc (1.5 maybe?). The chapters itself, around the 100 mark became crazy short. Like you could fit 2/3 of these into a normal chapter. So these 400 are the equivalent of perhaps 150 normal chapters length wise. The actual plot is probably around 100? Combined with the general slow pacing its incredibly frustrating to read, and if it weren't for the general quality, I would have dropped this a while ago. Honestly would prefer author combines chapters and reduces cliffs. Defintely a book you would need to stockpile.That being said, this is still head and shoulders above most of the other originals, especially the drivel that are high ranked but chock full of plotholes and juvenile characters (the characterisation, not the actual age). The MC is naive but a quick learner (understandable considering his peasant background), isn't forced into idiotic actions. The general annoying xianxia cliches are minimized and characters other than the MC have more than 2 dimensions. Overall a definitly good read compared to the others on this site, but not amazing with serious pacing/length issues. So on this site, this is worth 5 stars, but on novelupdates and outside, probably 4. Recommend stockpiling between reads.
This is shockingly good..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
From what little I've read so far it's been a bit of a roller coaster at the .beginning and so far its been pretty funny! Hopefully this novel gets picked back up, am really sad that it feels like it might have been dropped.:'(
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Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
A pretty nice concept of Time travel and scifi with a mix of fantasy and Magic. Not something I met everyday. The narration was splendid as it was nearing its perfection. Not something a newbie like can easily criticize. Haha Kudos!