Bedjo_Coc
interesting. MC with a brain. i hope the MC can still. have brain and not losing it with more chapters. at 1 or 2 chapters it seem like that jp novel saving 80.000 gold in another world. but its actually different, author probably got idea from there ,i don't know. but so far this novel more interesting or have some interesting plot that i never read before . so yeah i hope this novel get picked
The overall work is pretty good but there is some things that it lacks to stand out. For one, your starting theme is very cliche in which the main character gets dumped by a love interest, which initiates the protagonist to acquire a special ability. In order to amend this error, develop a groundbreaking plot to draw in the readers.
Its a very interesting novel, with a little patient you will get to understand it. The novel talks about the life of Dr. Hannibal Lecter, a psychopath, and cannibalistic killer as he falls in love with special agent Clarice Starling.
I see this novel like a modern-day beauty and the beast but with a twist
Wow, the meteor landing chapters were really awesome. You take mw into scene that I felt I was one of the Biker Brothers. I am enjoying this!
This started Okay. but downgraded quite quickly. The comedy is very repetative and cringey. Then story just became shit after the whole Ore appraisal where like half of the story upto now take place. Then it nose dived again when Mc started to introduce real world things like gun, granade and bombs into the world.
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
This is the first book I am reviewing in trial read. I have to say it's pretty good. And also this is first book I am reading which is of this genre
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As an author I will shamelessly give myself a 5 star as i found my story a little unique, i hope the readers would appreciate my work and give me power stones and reviews, its a huge motivation. I also have other books please check it out.Thanks for the hard work myself
Atleast use your orginal cover and NC disciption.This novel is BS.I will not recommend to both Old and New reader.ONE OF THE WORST MC..
