This is a near perfect novel. Main problems is that not too much chapters too satisfy my appetite. Premise of the book really fits the comedy. If you have read or like novels similar to "senior brother is too steady" or similar cautious cultivating novels, this novel will really make you laugh. Instead of only focusing on the mc, the author give each characters its own personality and unique characteristics that make the story more humourous and flesh out. Even with this, the story doesn't feel bloated and dragging. There is still a lot of side plots in it that is weave perfectly with the main plot without losing the humour. This is a really solid and funny novel. Really worth your time and I recommend this for reading.
First of all, the novel is good and it was worth my time reading it. The grammars are ok I think, some mistakes here and there but it doesn't matter, at least I could convey what they meant
Very good novel , there are just few problems with understanding of what's going on in novel . First of all , read cultivation level auxiliary chapter. It skips many steps regarding cultivation. Also , yes I'm just sad about female lead not understanding male lead but that's just how it is .
Well don't be biased when you read novel , like I said before that novel doesn't explain story in an understanding manner several times , we just need to understand it ourselves.
i like this novel keep up the good work :D
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Looking good. Always wanted to read a novel where the MC basically focused on solely his physical body.
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Ill just put a 5star to my overall rate to add confidence
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The novel is ok. the translation is a bit problematic as I beleive that the translator just translator tried to translate everything word for word. which caused some words be akward. The story development is also ok but I wouldnot say it best as everything was explained in casual fashion during conversations may be thats for the best. After reading 39 chapters, I still cannot get the total view of mc's character. The mc's character impression is not bold and noticeable as the story wants.
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Better than most.....hopefully the relation ship of the ML and FL will get better, not in a romantic way, but in a cooperative and friendly way.
They should be less ass holes to each other, a rough and relatively realistic relationship.
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