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Hey author here. As always I'm giving myself a rating. I'm introducing a new type of system in this novel world. A borrowing system. Psst!!!! Here's a spoiler. The MC will borrow items from this system. Don't miss this!!!!!!!
Looking for action, sci-fi, suspense and romance with a touch of anime? well you have come to the right book.ps: updates daily so don't miss out d thrills.yours truly ?
Hi, author here. I’m not shameless. This story is one of the best stories on this platform. Go read and see it for yourself.Though, don’t come ranting if it isn’t to your liking. Every person has his/her preferences. The thing you dislike can be the thing like by others.
except for some grammatical issues everything else is just WOW!! now after reading some initial chapters you might think that this has some similarities with 'Author POV'..... but no. The story is very different than author pov, it may seems a little similar in initial chapter but that clearly display that the author is inspired by 'author's pov' NOT even a ounce of copying is done.
Our MC is a poor, but good looking student, and his family is poor, plus his dad is sick. Oh, yes, and the beautiful younger sister, who is a pain in the neck. Luckily, the MC picks up an obsessed gaming system and our story starts from there.
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Calm down, guys. I'm sure there is an agreement between qidian and the translators(credit is even given). Doesn't mean you stupid fucks (not everyone) should give poor ratings to the novels
This is literally just a copy and paste of another trial novel a few weeks back....like full 20 chapters the plot and scenario is literally the same? Is this what the site is coming to? No new ideas just copies?
So long bald vampire, you will be missed. May another brave translator pick you up and say FUCK YOU QIDIAN?.Since i need 140 character to post this, i will give you guys recipe.Sate kelinciBahan-bahan500 grdaging kelinciKecap manis100 mLairMinyak gorengGaramsecukupnyaKaldu bubukDaun salam2 ruasLengkuas (memarkan)1 ruasjahe (memarkan)Gula merahBumbu halus:1 sdtMerica butir5 siungBawang merah3 siungBawang putih4 buahCabe merah2 buahcabe rawit (sesuai selera)4 butirKemiriBumbu kacang:1 genggamKacang tanah goreng1 siungbawang putih3 buahcabe rawitsedikitDaun jeruk/kulit jeruk purutsecukupnyaGula merahKecap manisLangkahPotong dadu daging kelinci. SisihkanTumis bumbu halus sampe harum. Masukan gula merah, daun salam, lengkuas dan jahe. Aduk sebentar sampai layu. Matikan apiMasukan daging kedalam bumbu halus yg telah d tumis. Diamkan sekitar 30-45 menitTusuk2 daging yg telah direndam tadi. Tuang kecap di atas sate. Bakar di atas arang sampai matang sambil dioles bumbuBumbu kacang: haluskan bawang putih, cabe rawit, gula merah, daun jeruk/kulit jeruk purut sedikit, kacang tanah yg telah di goreng. Setelah halus tumis bumbu kacang sampe harum. Matikan api.tambahkan kecap manisSate siap dihidangkan dg saus kacangENJOY?Just copy-paste this to google translate indonesia->english to understand the recipe.
The narration style gives me vibes of an African woman narrating a legend to her kids or grandkids and I love it. it feels rushed but if this is maintained throughout the novel it can be a good and innovative as well as bold narration style. Great book.Only issue would be punctuation.the commas are excessive. maybe watch a YouTube video on how to use commas and full stop. There. A 5 star book will be born.
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It’s one of these novels again. I dropped it early on so my review might seem redundant, but... Qidian... please do not pick up this novel. It’s a repeat of all the other novels that share these tropes and cliches with nothing akin to unique. Although I did enjoy some parts, that was merely because it was copy paste rhetorical comedy concepts that would make anyone laugh. It’s also a shame the title is a bit misleading as I was expecting something similar to Lin Ran, but as far as I read there seemed to be only one plot device: fighting notorious thugs and villains to save beautiful women. The story has regressed in terms of quality over 20 chapters (I mean seriously, how is this possible) and the beginning was saturated to begin with.This novel is as if Genius Daddy in the City and The Mightiest Little Peasant had a baby.
