super bien bonne continuation, hâte de continuer à le lire
5 chapters in this is what I can say.Absolutely incredible, the way the emotions are proudly written with elegance, the way the environments are described with perfection, everything is just perfect. I'll continue reading this for the foreseeable future, and I cannot wait for new chapters to come out!TL;DRGREAT NOVEL, MUST READ!
very good story and doesn't have locked chapters, thank you for that, I'm looking forward to the next chapters
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Very nice story . Keep going on . Well done ??
You was in shadow ban, bro. But I found you ? ?? 4/5 for german before reading ?
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Give the MC a gold medal!!! This guy is one of the few "reincarnated former power cultivator" who actually has the bearing and wit of someone with millennia of experience and won't suddenly devolve into bouts of teenage protagonist angstyness
The pacing of the story is unrealistic and rushed. And the main character feels undervelop and lacks personality.When I first saw that this novel was about hunter x hunter I was realy excited, however i quickly realized that my excitement was fir nothing. By combining a epic manga and similarly epic novel it only causes the novel to be bloated by surplus of concepts. Ultimately this does not feel like a hunter x hunter novel, but instead reads as your standard broken system cultivator novel.
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Alot of Grammer mistakes and story narration is not that great. But every scene is told in detail in simple words. It will be better with more grandik words and lesser Grammer mistakes. All the best
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