[I said an enemy with a Power Level of over 900, you misheard me! Hehe]
" Fuck... " Liam groaned as an unidentifiable head lay next to his. The pain from the landing was numbed by the fright and adrenaline that coursed through his veins.
"This is a lot easier than I expected..."
Jasmine's health improved a lot and they spent the day watching children's movies. Emily called the orphanage to inform them that Jasmine will be staying at her house for one more night. Tomorrow, before her shift starts, she will be dropping her off at the Learning Hall where the kids spend most of their mornings.
System: you have now inherited the ownership rights of skydragon forest and is now recognized as its rightful ruler, in effect ...now. Other bonuses include an upgrade to the map mapping everything in the forest in detail. The final bonus is a power-up ability which is the ability to create objects - using cp of course to build it. The function will be available in the system menu. -
But he did not cry, he held back the tears with all of his might.
I love adventure stories so I thought I would get into this one. Boy was I wrong. For the first 3 chapters he spends trying to get a fruit out of a F--ing tree. So I think it can't be like this through the whole novel right? So I check the titles of the chapters. It takes him 6 chapters to get to the city 11 chapter to find out about his sister. I mean you know its bad when not only does he spend 4 or five paragraphs describing the characters face. But he also uses needlessly complicated words like sclera and umbra. Could have just said whites of his eyes and deep brown. All in all the set up looked good but action is no where to be seen in first 3 chapter which does not draw me in and make me want to read more. And its toooo looong winded giving the pace a needlessly slow speed making you fell like your drowning in description.
Chu Tiannan? Han racked his brains thoroughly before a blurry male figure appeared in his head, in his vision, the male was prancing about in front of him when he was in a struggle to control himself, so he had just knocked out the bloke in a blow. Was it the same guy? His expression, too, turned weird.
"Hmm, a pack of caniums had migrated from down south. And in order to assert their dominance they decided to take me down."
invisible dragon trembled a bit but invisible dragon
I love this story it. It started off really slow but it really starting to pick up. This character's are very compelling. I'm busting at the seams to see what happens next.
Hidden Gem ? for Historical and Kingdom Building lovers