The Angel That Became Obsessed With The Most Superior Human

So catchy, the synopsis

my only complaint is that the main character, a reincarnated 18 year old, acts as if he's mentally 2 years old near the beginning of the novel, which is rather frustrating. other than that, it's pretty solid.

Interesting concept, but poorly executed.  The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing.  Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat.  Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities.  So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish.  I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.

I don't usually read Eastern Fantasy but this one seems really interesting, been hearing about it from some discord servers and honestly I'm excited uwu uwu uwu

Uhhh finally it's out!!! Been waiting for soooo long.So, to end this review: ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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