Would rate higher but the mistakes in the cultivation stages is very annoying! It seems to be a book that needs at least 100 chapters to firmly set the pace of the story! Hope it gets picked just to see what the author has in mind!
Interesting story with a lot of potential!The shifting POV is a nice touch.There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo.Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful.The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from.Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.
this is after reading 15 chapters, should have said too much Gore in there, not in comical Gore, but really emotional
The are so meany great video game novels without reviews :( I will make it my job the review and support them. What a great novel you have here. I will support with my power stone if I can tommorow
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This novel seems interesting and has potential. MC doesn't like to be manipulating or control by the system. The system also gives MC information clearly without holding back. I'm looking forward to see how is this gonna play out. I hope that author could increase the amount of chapter release per day. Fighting!!
It is surprising to list such professions that give you the skills to develop a wide range of chapters.Cases like: "He deals with an antisocial problem and socializes with the marginalized because of his gaming skills ..."I could continue reading for hours and commenting more ... multicultural character, hypercompetent ... I recommend reading and learning scripture.
As I am reading it, it helps me widen my vocabulary as a teenage student. A very nice and complex story but with a solid character. This story is not cliché. Amazing! ?
Really hope this novel gets picked for trial read. I was able to find raw and read machine translate through google translate. and it is a really good novel in my opinion. sadly the only way to read more than 50 chapters of this novel to to get it picked for translation because the raw website charges after 50 chaps and since it is based in china there is no way for me to pay and get access to the rest of the chapters. So please help get this Great novel picked.