I absolutely loved this series. My friend got me hooked on this site. It's really frustrating when I run out of coins because I want to read them all to completion
There are only a few chapters, but besides a few minor mistakes in the plot that could easily be the result of forgetting what was written in a previous chapter, it can be seen that the writing quality and plot are well formed. The MC is a little dumb, but its on purpose in this one. Read the book if you want to know more!!
Ok, so the cover art are just characters from Fire Emblem Three Houses but the story is still good. Its rather enjoyable. I'd give it a try if you're looking for something to read.
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Have yet to read this but will update once I do. However, the premises of the story is based on a betrayal in game. I don’t know why it would matter so much since it’s only a game—it’s not like their life is on the line like in SAO. Why doesn’t he just start over? Better yet, he should choose better friends.Doesn’t sound that interesting but I’ll read it anyways since I’ve caught up on all my favorite stories.
I'm glad I decided to stick with the story, its enjoyable, gave me a few laughs at times but most importantly (for me) its captivating enough to keep me wanting to read more. However, I would strongly advise the author to return to his first chapters (50 or so) and correct the spelling and grammatical errors. The latest chapters are around 95% without errors and fun to read but a new reader won't start from chapter 50 and the vast majority of them won't try to power through like others. So please, even if you have to dedicate 1 or 2 days to do this, revisit your first chapters and clean them up, it will help greatly.
I got asked at chapter 134 to make a review and this is my review.Writing quality great.Story development is also great but it seems like you forgot the shop girl who is the only woman who got his mother's "acknowledgement".Character design is great except for the Mc's friends from the real world who I personally don’t want in the story. His harem and family is enough. The Mc is also to weak without his glove wich is the only thing I dislike about him.Current updating stability is 2 chapters every day and that is absolutely great.World background is interesting but Zach has said that he traveled to other realms with his father and he should have been able to train qi/mana there.The game is interesting but the lower floors are boring and you know it. You even made him go into a sea realm to make it a little bit more interesting.
I don't even know where to start I mean I guess it's your standard paid novel it's fairly good quality but has the semi standard issue of plot holes I mean it's supposed to be a regression vrmmorpg yet after he hit level 10 suddenly no leveling not skills no farming ect ect he just suddenly starts pulling stuff out of no where because of his future knowledge yet all the resources needed to create these things arent mentioned he doesnt go searching for them it's just suddenly I already have all the items to create this or this barren valley with nothing in it take some soldier go for a walk find the hidden forest of night that has the ultra sss diamond grade rainbow mystic moonstone that's even super rare late game I'm exaggerating but that's how it comes off also he supposedly logged in 2 months before even the beta testers can log in yet only a week or so seems to pass before its beta log in day overall author seemed to spew chapters out as fast as possible and didn't make sure he wasnt contradicting himself or forgetting things and it shows
Well there is not that much to say about this. Basically the stuff that always happens in cultivation novels: MC as a previous genius young master getting crippled and humiliated; finding a op/godly/heavenly technique; masses of dumb arrogant idiots getting offended and underestimate MC which leads to trying to cripple/humiliate/kill him (face slapping); dog **** luck MC; "white-long-slender-leg women" all over the place; adopted sister/secret lover with unknown op background...and so onso anyways:-translation quality is fine-stability of updates: we'll see :^)-story development is as expected of a cultivation novel (MC becomes the strongest in a certain area/city/country/region/continent and goes to a "harder" place-character design is XD (mostly empty, lifeless and brain dead people)-world background is whatever LOL-thanks for reading bye
Great novel ...... unfortunately I have to drop it since I can't tolerate him being a simp towards two women (those two just don't deserve it). Simping should have limits!!!
Author your novel is really interesting....................and that'why i give you five Stars.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
From what I have read so far I can safely say that the mc is an idiot. However he is a good idiot, his intelligence leads him to overthink and overestimate his situation which leads to hilarious outcomes. The story is well written and humerous. The earliest chapters do start with a little fat shaming however, which is in bad taste. This is less noticable in the later chapters and the story is really enjoyable. Well worth the read.