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I like it. The plot is 100% plot armor but this novel will be fun for lets say 50-150chapters. In long term it will not work unless author will have lot of original ideas.
I have to Say Devil is the best author writing about evil MC it grabs your attention and takes you on a full ride through crazy shet that keeps you wanting more. You won't regret reading any of his work there all great.
Right so before we begin, a big spoiler warning about the setting from a guy who read up to chapter 280 in the raws..........MC starts off as an innocent highschool boy. In a world filled with demons, therefore the people who can fight back against those demons are respected, so martial arts are respected. The are also supers, people who awaken various types of powers and our MC belongs to this type.Now, now, calm down, I know this sounds generic as fack, but the real world setting is not explored as much as the various worlds he ends up in. THE REAL WORLD IS A DREAM.Right, back on track. MC’s fantasy similator lets him ‘similate’ himself in another body in another world (the specifics are in the novel). The current worlds that are revealed are The Sorcerer World, The Azure World, and The Sanctuary World. Of these 3 only the first two are explored.The Sorcerer World is a world of knights and magic. MC visits this world three times, first as a ordinary man who becomes a well known mercenary, secondly a noble scion who becomes a Great Knight and forms an empire, and lastly a Sorcerer at the peak of a Rank 1 Official Sorcerer.The Azure World is a cultivation world. Two visits. The first time our MC lands himself in the body of a fellow who has great destiny and becomes the strongest in the world with the max cultivation base that the world allows, and to go to another world safely he needs 10 of him. So he raises talents all across the world, but they all failed their tribulations. In the end he went by himself, his foundation destroyed his cultivation base started collasping, he accepts the people who saved him as disciples and turned his body and remaining cultivation into nutrients to improve the talents of his disciples. The second time, well he also dominated the world.Then MC is blessed by RNG Jesus and got his cultivation base from the Azure World back in the real world. BUT THE WORLD IS A DREAM. EVERYONE IS ALREADY DEAD AND IS COLLECTIVELY DREAMING WITH THE WORLD. After a time of spending time with his family, the dream collaspes. MC uses his cultivation base as fuel to find another world to survive, but it isnt enough. Then the world wakes up and decides to spend its last energies and blessing from everyone in the world to help him find a new world to live.He ends up in a world of knights and magic and gods.
It's surprising how a single chapter can ruin everything. If you wonder why then check out the "falling off the cliff" chapter. I can't be even bothered to check the chapter number smh
Stating my review as of C51, I held the top Non-Author review on the original so please read the whole review.I would check on it daily till it finally was removed by the author himself. It was a great book that I rated 4.5 Stars for having great Writing Quality, Stable updates, Good Character Design, the only issue was the lacking story development which was due to low chapter count, and lower world background due to the main character as of then not expanding his horizons past 3 places, all described and imaginable through context, just a lack of world knowledge. This story has, in my opinion, different from the original too much for it to be considered a replacement.The Writing Quality is lower, at 3.5 stars, but I rounded to 4 due to the rating system in place. The author can't seem to stay on topic and butts in the story to explain things that need no explanation, and could if was a good author, be explained in dialogue or thought. For example, the heart cultivation system, they deviate for a minute to explain the heart cultivation system, how it's based on the soul and therefore one of the hardest things in the cultivation world to raise, and how only the 3 top immortal emperors have reached its peak.He can think back on his death while cultivating in his store," I could have caught up to him and beat him if I had raised my heart cultivation to Heart Void... I'm still stuck at Heart unmoving mountain, I may have had a glimpse into it previously but my cultivation now is simply too low
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This story is ****ed like how can mc allow one of the people who serve him to be raped and not fight back and don't do the whole he's stronger then me bull**** because there's no way that's true the mc has intent that Wich is supposed to be hard to get and let's not forget the 5 years of constant death battles to make him stronger it's a good story but there's some major bull**** about some of the things like what's the point of Alice if she just to get raped.
Awesome heart racing story. He’s lucky to the extreme and finally learned how truly powerful he is. I hope ot getd picked, I need to know what happens next.
So far im 150 chapters in and I've learned that China all around is an extremely horrible place to live just my opinions I mean besides being black and always having to read about people make fun of the MC for having dark skin and the corruption of how doctors who are ignorant get in through connections and how you have to give a doctor more money on top of the already expensive treatment fees if you want them to DO THEIR JOB CORRECTLY and the constant peer pressure of ruining your lungs by smoking and the misogynistic views of women not to mention what china is doing right now to Muslims/people with middle eastern looks china would be DECENT but you know to bad all of those things are how the author describes china or are something that has been shown in real life also the MC is a bit dull he has no motivation for better things in life which is really unrealistic in this realistic story he constantly gives away half to 1/3 of his pay to people that don't even need it for "cultivating good relationships" and for half of the story half the stuff he has is borrowed from some rich lady IDK I just feel like its another one of those cookie cutter MC's that basically only have 2 emotions or do 2 things without caring about other things which is a bit retarded cause no matter how long they've lived they'll still have desires and for some reason none of these mc's on webnovel whether it be realistic or fantasy genre don't have basic human nature apparently they've transcended that or for some reason just because they got a system their self control or reasoning is better than millions to billions of people sorry for my rant but yh this story is pretty good I do hope to see MC get married and have a kid.
Different and refreshing compared to other reincarnation stories I've read .Grammar is decent and only needs slight tweaks , overall enjoyable .
Love the realistic approach to storytelling and the unique direction it heading!!! Even just looking at mc and mother relationship is awesome.
