After reading everything that's translated at the moment I really have nothing, but praises. I really do hope that this gets selected so I have something to entertain myself with.
Awesome heart racing story. He’s lucky to the extreme and finally learned how truly powerful he is. I hope ot getd picked, I need to know what happens next.
The setting is detailed and interesting and the story is also well written. The main issue I see is with paragraphing with some of the longer paragraphs just needing to be split up.
