writerprimordial
I am really liking this novel. My favorite is the character of the main character. Great work so far. I hope mr. author keeps writing for a long time. Recommended ?
It's a good read. A Plant MC is unique, and kingdom-building is the cherry on top.It's still too early to say anything about the storyline , but so far it's good. I'm not sure if the author intended it this way, but I hope the system gives MC some options, such as in the skill tree and shop. Also, provide some evolution options, like different types of tree monsters. Also, please explain the significance of level up and "leafling" level up. If possible, describe his new evolved form(s). That's it for my suggestion.
The characters are life like and the start of the story was very interesting. I would like to see more of Archer and adventures through this world, looking forward for more chapters from the author!
Wow. I'm actually surprised by how good this novel is. It has great potential and the only downside is it's lack of chapters. :) :) :) :) :)
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Oh please do more in this world. This was a well written book that drew me in. You did great on building this world and I loved the characters. This was vivid and bloodthirsty.
PLEASE vote for this novel , It's like Custom Made Demon King. The protagonist have a cheat : Dimensional Codex that let him reincarnate/Teleport in random Worlds/Dimension: Movies, Novels.....
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Once again, I am here. You see, I am running out of ideas to write in this novel, and to be honest, I know the story is bland, cliche, and boring. Yeah, even I know that. If there are still readers out there, I will be ending this story once I reach around chapter 250 or more. I specialize more on apocalypse, horror and game element genres more than fantasy. I would rather focus on my other novels rather than focus here. So everyone who have followed this until the end, thank you for reading.
When a virtual game becomes reality but you’re the only player.I really enjoyed reading this novel and you should too!The synopsis is pretty bad so I’ll explain a little about the story. We follow Sean, a gamer and raid leader. But the game he plays, Miracle, has suddenly turned into reality with himself as the only player left. Everything is real but he still has game abilities like leveling up. But he doesn’t have his possessions and level from the game. That’s the bare minimum you need to know.As for what kind of setting, it’s a sword and magic world. There are kingdoms and empires as well as demonic creatures. The gods exist but mostly in lore... for now? There are magical beasts and species that don’t exist in reality, like dog-headed guys. They are lizards though.Others might say the novel is slow or has nothing unique, but I see it as a high-quality, polished writing that is very exciting to read even if it’s a bit slow (It didn’t feel slow but you can tell it’s slow). They take their time describing architecture, clothing, and even game UI.I like the MC. He’s not a wimp nor does he do things without a purpose. He’s laid-back when he can afford to but is an authoritative commander that takes no sh*t. He requires absolute trust which doesn’t help when he’s just a young boy in the eyes of others. He also only brags to and teases his companion.His companion (which is a girl of course) is very nice too! She was meh in the beginning since first impressions are sometimes off but then you learn more about her and see her personality better later on. She definitely has a story behind her and is a pretty good fit with the MC.The story has no solid direction for now other than getting stronger. Despite that though, the story is feels pretty linear with some degree of freedom when it should feel kinda vague and ambiguous. That’s a good thing if you couldn’t tell. But there are definitely other goals that they are aiming to accomplish, just that I cannot say because smol spoilers.Just so you know, Sean knows of what happens in the future of the game and has pretty in-depth knowledge of game mechanics and information. Though sometimes those game mechanics don’t follow through since it became reality.The translation is very high-quality but there are very few but noticeable mistakes. Such as DUBUFF instead of DEBUFF. There aren’t many cases of this. I can count them on one hand but they are very easy to notice.All in all, great read and I expect it to be one of the better ones in this batch of trial reads even though this is the first one I’ve read from them.Now it’s time for this man to sleep. It’s 6:45 as of writing this.
trash mc's a moron, the vr game is also trash, it will only give you i hunt this monster, it gives exp now im level 300 blah blah blah most of the game part is skipped and only tells his level, the city name, some monster name thats it, there's not even an npc, no quest either he just grind kills monster then max level trash
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