Hello author here , am writing this novel during free time , if your wondering why I am going fast pace is because I like making my characters op , plus no harem , no cheating in relationship stuff like that, I really dislike cheating relationship, and thanks for reading if your reading my novel! God bless you all!!
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How to u guys think shell react when she sees her brother again hmmmmmm update please thanks u auther for the chapter!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My brain cells are f*cking dying. The grammar errors, the plot, the mc, everything in this novel can cause brain cancer. I can understand the general plot but sometimes you won't understand what's happening in between. We have a 4 yo mc which for me really killed off everything. The story is kinda stupid, it's like it's been written by a 10 yo and cmon what on the actual f*ck is boomx300000. "Best sfx ever." Bloody hell the harem members are dumb especially the girl with the eat me I'll kill u system. I don't know what's wrong but she really pisses me off. The fights are OK the power ups are OK but overall I lost my mental capacity to think. And in all honesty reading this is like a hate-f*ucking session almost like r*pe. I am warning future readers, if you want a serious story gtfo of here cause this ain't for u. Well that's all I have to say and I'm really sorry dear author I just really need to vent my frustrations hope you understand that we have different views and opinions but still thank you for making this story possible.
Like others have said, the translation quality is borderline trash. It really feels like MTL that was lazily edited. Other than that, the story itself is quite good. Decently paced, a little bit like slice of life, but with an immortal protagonist fumbling his way through traditional cultivation. So far, it doesn't seem like there will be any outrageous xuanhuan tropes, so I'm hoping this gets selected. It's a great change of pace.
Wow This is amazing I I’m so glad that I found i don't understand how this is not popular yet.
Listen here people: THE ONLY REGRET you will feel is not to have found this sooner, cuz damn, I felt it. One of the nicest writings you'll find around here
Really loved it. Like the whole crime is everywhere setting and how the mc plats sorta of a antihero role and especially love the body modification. it would be cool if the next upgrade had something to do with Zach's defensive and give's him like something like titanskin or dragon/serpent scales that deflect knives and such which he can use to not have to use a poultice every he gets hurt or gives him away to attack without his tail like claws that he can use so people don't find out he's Demon. Personally I don't mind the writing but some people can be put off not read this fantastic story so fix it if you can if not I'll still keep reading because this is one of the few books on this site that I enjoy reading.
Hello guysIf you like game like system, unique mc and world background discover little by little you are in the good place.I will upload chapter when i want but a minimum of 5 per week.Hope you enjoy fellow daoist.
Author really good job in describing the world. Also, the novel is well written, it makes me jealous. Your choice of words are amazing.Keep up the good work and hope you gain more fans!