A Lovely Angel is Disguised as a Demon

Love the realistic approach to storytelling and the unique direction it heading!!! Even just looking at mc and mother relationship is awesome.

I really like the story I hope this will continue. ?????The story has a bit of racism at the start but it is not on the main character but on the side. Buymt it is only 3 chapters and the MC has nothing to do with it.Overall it is a good read.

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Not bad but the reduced lifespan thing bums me out… what’s th point in observing a mayfly… im sure it’l be fixed by plot armour so whatever

It relies too much on its humor, which is a problem when it isn't funny. It's the "the MC is stupid," kind of humor, where you're supposed to laugh at the MC. However, when the mc is too dense to suffer the consequences of his own stupidity, it isn't funny. It's pathetic.

5 star for author and story, 1 star for "Cory".... if the other characters have english names i will not be able to handle it.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................