Logically, the novel is progressing in a manageable way for now. The only problem is that the girl next to the MC can somehow keep up with him. And the girl has no special lineage. It's uploaded almost every day. The average episode length is neither too short nor too long.
I honestly find this story to be a refreshing break from most of the more generic stories. I can't say too much since this book is somewhat new and lacking in the number of chapters. I'll write another review in the future when we progress further into the story. For now, I would say it's a good read.
Writing style is really good. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds naturally. I took liking in Lu Qingyun, he is truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!
If you don't like a simp MC who is extremely prone to be Cucked don't read it. Just imagine denying to have seggs in an eroge becoz you are searching for true love. It is annoying.
Honestly, author just **** up this novel. So many messed up profesionist. I mean cultivator why dont stick to path of cultivator, MC just turned into card wtf was that. And honestly mchine gun? Boxer? How can they fucking strong, and what kind of reain they did to become strong? Spirit enery? Mana?. Oh btw MC habe War God system right? Why dont depend on it to become god?
I've already read the first 8 chapters, beside the fact that i discovered it (through my thread) only two hours ago :'D
This book is amazing! And so well written! I will definitely read the last three chapters as soon as i finish school today. Really well done, author! You are amazing!!!
bruh it's already dropped. don't waste your time or currency. again and again now everything's dropped. if privilege chps are gone so is the novel.
speechless, your writing was so amazing (wow)
I am in love with this novel
you details it so well
it's really amazing author
my greatest wishes for you is to get tons of views and likes
Read it for 10 hours straight, right after passing 100 chapter the story character everything just started deteriorating. The mc started acting like a harem protagonist while girls taking advantage of his powers. Story just stopped progressing, just slowed down significantly. (If you are looking for a non harem and stoic mc with little to no romance your mind will repeat the slogan below)
All and all MY Day is ruined and disappointment is immeasurable.
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its got potential and it's alright it's has some small kinks other it's fine along with being apart of the small number of kingdom building novels which I wish there were more of