Hohoho you know a gem as soon as you see it! Cant wait for all the other chapters sir author! It's a fresh concept among all these webnovels plus your ability to show is really great
Sci-Fi is not really my cup of tea but this is great and interesting. The sotry is very immersive and I could see that you Author did a lot of background research for this. I really like this and I'm going to add this to my library and wait for more chapters!
Interesting story. Will read to see where it will go. good work by the author and I'm sorry, I'm sleepy to write a good review. Just don't drop and keep writing.
Bolcurut here, desu. This is the novel that I have promised; to replace the novel Enter of Adventure. However, unlike the novel Enter of Adventure, which is a VRMMOPRG game, this novel is a MOBA-type game played on smartphones. I have made this novel well and correctly so that you are comfortable reading it. Very different from the novel Enter of Adventure which has many errors. And I hope you like this novel. That's all from me, thank you very much for taking the time to read this novel.
500 chapter is and the conclusion it's:trash...yep kind of trash ,i regret Reading it, the translation it's decent,the story it's repetitive (like 70% it's just useless filler information )the kingdom building it's quite nice actually but romance...it doesn't exist ,also kant killed quite few "beautiful girl/women"i can say he has a sadistic pleasure in killing girls...yea it's a trash novel, in final it's so repetitive and it's gets boring.
you sad person
Хорошая, и очень лёгкая новвела, можно почитать и отдохнуть. Хоть фантазии многовато, но при этом рамсказывают жизненную ситуацию. Надеюсь автор продолжит публикацию.
A good novel.However, there's various points needed to be mentioned.1- Early wall pay chapters, with only 31 chapters being able to decide whether you like the story or not. This isn't a problem itself If it weren't for the short chapters. The chapter are too short for what the novels need.2- This point is related with the previous one, due to short chaps, there isn't a feeling of development with every chapter, you need to start lengthen the chaps or at least rethink about how you will build each chapter, please don't fall under the premise of spamming chapters for small events that could be easily be fixed with a length of 1.800k to 2k words length.3- The early chaps really need to be extended to at least 3k words to explain your new readers where they are and let everything set go for the walled chaps, where you could put the story on.Nonetheless, the novel have an interesting premise, a good world building and background and the MC is interesting. What I liked more about this novel is the ground to improvement with the MC personality, as having a new chance to experiment things he couldn't in his previous life could lead to interesting plots.The females characters are well portrayed as the side characters personalities too.
Excellent grip of language and taught process ?? Fantabulous storyline✨✨. Keep posting us the delightful work?.. Keep up the good work ??. I'm thrilled!! Eagerly waiting for ur upcoming story track post it as soon as possible ??
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Great work so far but the could you space things properly So it is easier To read otherwise Great Job keep It up # Godzilla is smexy just saying
Sinopsis sounds great until you actually reads it, it’s garbage full of face slapping. enemies suddenly crawling out from some corner and going after the MC.