It is a really good book. Very well written. Tme mc reincarnated but does not seem to have a cheat ability. The mc is not arrogant and looking to fight people at every turn. The mc is actually a rational human being.
The author of this book as wrote the History's number one founder and HIstory's strongest senior brother novels. So based on those two novels, you know this one will be amazing.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Yes yes yes. Also, I do have to ask what this novel's name was in chinese.
I loved the story and want more stories like this. For now. I'm waiting for more updates. I like this
Considering this story has barely started, I think it will be safe to say that it is NOT a review more of a wish letter. So, this is my personal opinion which is heavily biased. I hope this will be of some help to the author.
I also want to say that I am a current reader of the author's other work "Journey of a legend". I might compare certain aspects of this work's writing style to that as this work is heavily unfinished.
Concept: It's a very interesting and, as I have not read anything like that before, unique concept. Cultivating using artifacts that are apparently only used for making jewelry. This has a lot of scopes to introduce new things. I am very eager to see how things unfold as chapters come out. I will say that if the cultivation is half as good as "journey of a legend" then it will be awesome. But looking at the auxiliary chapter it seems this system will more than a match for that. The separation of realms and each realm with their unique rules and worlds is very intriguing too. In short, conception-wise, this work is phenomenal.
Story: Amazing prologue. I really loved it and it easily catches attention. It was dark and gritty but at the same time deep. And I love the fact that you left some part to the reader's imagination and make them rationalize why Cal did what he did. I am eager to see how you develop the story. Whether you give Cal and Khal parallel life or it is something else.
Characters: There aren't many characters introduced yet to talk about them. One thing I liked is that you gave a brief description of the characters' appearance (MC excluded). If possible try to include personality traits in them(Like, instead of saying brown eyes, say brown eye full of mischief). It helps to know them more and visualize easily. But this is my personal opinion so feel free to ignore it. However, I would like to state 2 major things about MC and his love interest. The prologue gives the idea of a dark MC. So, either we get a dark MC or a moderate one with extensive character development. If you suddenly change the MC's attitude without proper development it throws off the readers. I feel the need to mention this because this has already happened(in the trial). His reaction after the scuffle with that young master does not complement his backstory at all and it threw me off. Secondly, as it is a non-harem novel and unless you are planning to give us a major plot twist we already have the love interest. The issue with introducing a love interest this early is that you need to give the character the same amount of care as MC. I really like to have her a great first impression and proper development. I will just say that I would rather not have another Emma in terms of initial introduction [img=recommend].
As for world development, character development, there is no point in saying about it now. And, as for writing style and spelling mistakes, it has significantly improved in this work. so not much there to say about it.
I wish you good luck with your work and looking forward to future chapters. I hope it's as good, if not better, as your other work. Thank you for your hard work. Keep it up!
Love Sci-fi novels and to be sincere this is my best so far. When I read the synopsis,I knew that this was one book I couldn't miss for the world and believe me when I say I wasn't disappointed. The book is intriguing,fancinating, motivating and superb.
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An amazing novel. It is really interesting. But I advise you to use easier words rather than some advanced words if you want all kinds of readers to try out your book. To be honest, if I was not that well versed in English I might drop your novel of the hat in the first paragraph. I don't know if you did research about traumas or you experienced it but I can totally feel the characters' emotions through your words. Hope you continue writing more and updating. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I'm expecting a lot from this author. It has a great start and a lot of potential and its pacing is to my liking. I like the synergy between the characters and the world building the author has done up to this point.
I'm expecting this novel too rise in the rankings and become one of the top novels on this website! definitely recommended a great read!
A masterful review would have to be written, the work demands it:
X-Rank Hunter X-RNK.
Genre: Fantasy
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They began to write. its first chapter on August 26, 2020, Jim Jabat, perhaps the main character. A well accomplished name that emulates the author: J & J.
Author: Jimar_Jemar, from the Philippines.
The synopsis has as its premise: "Jim wants to become a stronger hunter to at least protect himself and his relatives. And also, find his father who left him."
This is a contrast between the implausible, the transcendent and the traditional.
Rescue the values of the home. Demonstrate the youthful potential to recreate worlds, achieved by thousands of fans of reading and of course foster new generations of writers.
Author supporting his own work.
But i gotta start somewhere right? :p
I think the idea is pretty good, i have a lot of thoughts for the future.
Hope you stick around.