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Needs more updates and more updates updates and updates! This is a very good story just speed it up a little and get to the fighting and killing! You should add the MC having *** with his sisters or raping them! Make a harem!
hey why is there always someone who ask for raw whether it is good or trash novel. .. I just really can't understand
loved this, so sad the author dropped this book
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I hope you liked it, this is a remake version of my old novel. It isn't popular and full of mistake but I have improved so it is much better than the old one.
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A great piece of work, Must give try, all i want is the author to update more chapters, its addicting when you start reading. The characters and the story is well written too
Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.
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Starting reading as a review swap but I must say this is a very good story. The characters interaction and sudden and swift transition between main characters is very well done. I can't wait to keep reading I thoroughly enjoy this quirky story. One of my new faves!!
I can't understand mc's personality, she changes too often, sometimes he's very daring (when it's causing him problems) other times he's too loose, when he was a little more daring , it might have saved him some trouble...
another point that I don't understand, that's why the mc doesn't progress at all without his system, he spent a year at the academy without advancing only a little in his magic cultivation, nor in the level of these spells, he relies completely on his system, suddenly I don't understand what he does all the time in which the other students progress, are their talents so weak? it has no compatibility with black magic? the author does not explain anything, he is just blocking it as long as he does not use his system, which is frustrating
I find it incredibly ironic that a novel about an “advanced technology system” didn’t use the advanced technology known as spellcheck.
This right here is the kind of novel your read and would want to be adapted to an anime lovely novel nothing nagetaive to write about it