Anyone know what this novel raw title ???
The grammar is pretty bad and it’s sad that the author is from the US. I could barely get thru the 2nd chapter.
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I love this story Heesha it has every wording in the right place I also love LSR ??❤️❤️??? wait to see what he and his cat will accomplish together because I have a feeling that cat is something else ??
I love this Minecraft inspired story. It has an original take on different events and characters, making them really original! The world background is nicely established. Writing quality is great. And best of all, there may be a sequel coming!
I love this novel I m from india too and I like this I support you pls continue to write this novel pls release atleast 2 chapter a month plssss
Still one of the best stories I have in my library, I definitely will wait for the author to return and finish this story. I hope you will take this work further and farther.
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we need to address this matter . Dear Author. i read the message in the synopsis bar. let me clarify . your still gonna update chapters here but delete the previous ones? ex. current chapter 43 then after updating to 44 your gonna delete 43? is that how it works? pls clarify the situation
Score:7.5/10I wont lie, I used to love this book. But now I just feel sad by seeing the way it ended. Everything before the first flag war was almost perfect. The story had a very good beginning, with a nice hook. Even though the mc had an op ability, it was still balanced by the restrictions early on. The story was well written with the kingdom building aspect serving as a good slice of life setting. The small academy arc was intresting, as it served as a reminder to show the mc was not the strongest. It also allowed mc to make new allies and understand the structure and politics associated to high society. There were always mysteries left for future like the ruins.But then everything changed when the story when Micheal won the Flag tournament. The story just got overblown and the story accelerated too fast. All of a sudden mc became too strong, the kingdom building became less relevant, most of the side characters became too weak to be relavent to the plot. Even promised rivalries and villains got forgotten. Example: Quinn and the Zeus kid. At some point the story just became a civilization destroyer fantasy. There was almost no challenge in the story. Even the new hot topic ‘Nest’ became a second thought to the pantheon of God’s. We never even got proper finale of the relationship between Michael and their parents. Even ability extraction became boring.I don’t know why the Author was in such a hurry to end book. Cause the ending we got was just so anti climactic. Additionally, one of the weakest aspects of this book were creating side characters with deep personalities and Romance.There were very few memorable characters in this story, Danny was by far the most developed and followed by Caleb Zenovia. Maybe Fredrick was ok but in general not enough time was spent on them. As for the romance, it was so bad that it would have been better if there was none. It felt so lazy that I felt the author just didn’t event want to bother with it. At the end I just felt bitter abt the story.Again it’s a good book hands down but I really felt the author didn’t didn’t do ‘Justice’ to the story. It could have been so much more.
Tbh i like the story a lot but I think you need to reread some chapters and fix them up some part the mc does stuff not really fitting his role are at the given moment I love the story but just some part need fixing
Its fun and all in the story except that MC easily gets dragged into things again and again making him look like an idiot even though he seems to be smart.