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Probably the best novel out of the recent batch. Could be interesting if an actual translator jumps on board but with the MTL translation it's doomed to fail.
Mind blowing writing ideas represented on this book need for something more like this .Something more realistic Thanks keep it up. Best wishes for you.
This story is what I am looking for, while I'm reading this story, I felt like it reminds me of Owari no Seraph but I know it's far from it.
I really love the original story but what you did here was too off with all the exaggeration in the number of slaves and also why does the Mc have to be so disturbed.Well I at least expect it improves.
This is good, keep it up author HAREM IS LIFE
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I don’t know if it’s lost in translation or the author is racist, but I’m pretty sure the author is racist extremely racist. How do you get into American basketball and be racist to African-Americans like he calls African-Americans sewer he considers a sewer creatures.
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Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi and mystery stories but I've read a few. This story starts out slow but flows smoothly with no sense of interruption between the dialogues and the scene playing in the plot. The characters are distinguished well with their own features and their interactions and reactions are very realistic which makes it easier for the readers to engage with the plot. I love how you describe the actions and the event with simple words but gives a very detailed image in our mind. There are no grammar errors, which is really a plus point. I make mistakes in grammar sometimes too and correcting them really is tiring xD and reading a story with too many spelling mistakes or grammar errors just makes the reading experience feel bland. So I really love this. The author has a good writing style and it keeps the readers at the hook to know what really is going on. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and I will read the rest as well when I have more time. Great job! ^^
Very good for now, just hoping he won't become the cliche beta male. For now it doesn't seem like it, even though the author coincidentally managed to kill both of the guys from the other group lol.Waiting eagerly to see more!
to think people get payed for doing such a bad job...They should have just let it be, and let others do it instead of half assing this novel.
