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A book that has an actual decent plot and not one of those "MC can see through everything" or the "I sign up in a dark room by myself for 1,000 years and come out the strongest." Yet I don't see nearly as much people voting for it as they would for the others. Just a big let down to see what people want instead of good stories then they go and blame the APP.
Okay, so this novel is worth your time, at least it was for me because it made me smile and laugh a little in many days.So writing quality is good, I have no problem imagining the situations, Although there are he and she word got mixed up in the sentence but not much.I am at ch 57, the story has developed is good.
Webnovel ruined another story, it was free and getting translated and good with many fans. (Author has three good novels translated) It got forced into here and soon got cancelled. Why do this? Trolls of web-novel got another one down. As person who likes long stories this platform is really bad, storys get dropped here at 1000-1500 all the time. Why bring out new story every week if you dont have translators.
So... things haven't been the same for a long time. We haven't gotten new chapters in a while and the chapter drops have been inconsistent for a long time now. It is sad because this was the first novel I read and loved, I read it all like 4-5 times but I need to know if I should keep waiting for new chapter or at least a continuation in the future. It's frustrating not knowing if the story is going to come back or not. I rather know now instead of keep waiting for something that's not going to happen.
Read if you like pointless face slapping. I was willing to look past an extremely OP system and pointless face slapping, but how many times are you going to repeat the same plot? He has showed off infront of his High-school friends 5 times and it's only been 100 chapters. First he goes to friend's wedding and shows off, 20 chapters later, everyone has already forgotten how rich he is and are again treating him like a pauper. He's been collecting beauties without even touching them, I don't know what kind of Halal Harem he's building and he's already a multi billionaire but we are still reminding that his parents are poor, working people, he's yet to even treat them to lunch, author probably building them for an epic face slapping arc. I'm done with this, he owns the whole city at this point yet no one knows him.
i do wonder if the chapter of this new rewritten novel is the same with the old version's novel chapters :/ like if the chap 100 of this is chap100 of the older version or does the author changes many things from the older version?
The dialogue in these chapters is sparse but devastating. Lin Huaiyu barely says anything, and that's exactly what makes him so compelling. His first line to Song Zhiyi is just two words: 'No need.' Cold, dismissive, final. And then later, when she asks if he wants to try acupuncture, he just grunts 'Hmm.' That's it. One sound, and it tells you everything about a man who doesn't trust easily and doesn't give consent freely. But he does give it. That tiny shift—from refusal to acceptance—is huge, and it's communicated through a single grunt. Song Zhiyi's dialogue is equally effective in its own way. She's always measured, always professional. 'Regiment Commander Lin, your muscles are too tense. Relax a little, or the needles will hurt more and take longer.' She doesn't flinch at his coldness. She doesn't try to win him over. She just does her job, and that steadiness is its own kind of power. The stepmother and stepsister's dialogue is where it gets fun. Wen Shufen's desperate excuses, Song Yating's shrieking accusations—they sound exactly like what they are: people who think they're smarter than they are and are rapidly losing control. And Director Fang? 'Wishful thinking!' Four words that destroy two people's entire scheme. The author gives each character a distinct voice, and you can tell who's speaking even without dialogue tags.
One of my favorites so far. You've created a beautiful place there in New Dawn, hard core values.
please finish book or write more than one chapter. what a RIP oooooooooooffffffff
waiting for more
I'm hoping it's a start of something. They both have feelings for each other. Just give in already
wait a minute!.. i didnt unlock the final chapter by error, i thought it was finished...lemme see what i missed
