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I liked the characters of this story.but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events.otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence.I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.
hope u can continue this series good luck to the author.................hope u can continue this series good luck to the author.................
Just putting this here to say thanks to the translators for allowing me to read this story. Its a very genuine portrayal of romance and great read.
Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potential
I am not usually a fan of science fiction but I like your style and I am hooked to it. Looking forward to more. Kudos to the author for writing such a great story. i am loving it
there's not much to go on right this second but it's got the groundwork to be something better than a lot of other things I've read so I can't wait to see where you go from here
Nice nice i really love the book and waiting for more updatesXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOXKXOXKXKXOXOXOXOXXOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXO??????????????
Realy like Mc and his thinking, also from what i have read it is funny and interesting and a really good start???????????????????
This is nice! I will be expecting hard time for this one.Please read my novel, Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System. Thankss!!!!
author is this still going or did you drop it?..............................................................................................
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