it's a ok story cause the internet is filled with same kinda stories which are plotted batter so yeah a three star story but very slow progressing
I pray for all those foolish mortals who walked passed such gem....
Words cant describe how good a book is you have to read it and since everyone is different some might not like this but i personally recommand this and support it with ur stones as the story is nice and is frequently updated by the author ** if you read though my entire comment then wow thanks for reading i guess
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It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.
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I would be really happy, if this would continue.
Nice start love it please don’t drop this author you are talentedMore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapters please
When are you going to update also i live your story it is on my top five list!!! And that saying something because i have read like 400+ books
Its a trash novel with worse than the normal system. System gives nothing useful or reasonable apart from the must have plot armor items while giving a deadline till he dies. MC is a moron or author is a moron maybe both are morons since he keeps thinking real world is like the novels. And finally his points he gets to buy things. He over caps the points and then proceeds to buy 3 identical swords rather than martial arts and things that upgrade his cultivation. All and all a sad attempt comedy, a sad attempt at generic system somehow made even worse and sad story with names and terms thrown around with zero explanation and world building. Story is literally just MC goes to place X uses X item to cheat and awe all after fighting with X, X and X sects while X, X and X clans are watching.