The Prophecy of Ice and Lightning.

Absolutely love this book! I loved watching the MCs personality change from a young teen stuck with romantic issues taking on challenges he wasn’t prepared for to a grown adult capable of putting the greater planetary-scale interests before his own personal affairs.The early chapters may be a bit hard to read but if you put yourself in the MCs shoes during your hormonal years, I’m sure you will be able to relate to his issues. The overall plot is much more serious and bigger than the MC and so it’s worthwhile to stick to the book and keep reading. You won’t regret it.The writing quality has improved by leaps and bounds over the course of the book and the story is not very predictable making you wait to see how things actually turn out. The author is very interactdive in the discord community which makes it a very refreshing reading experience, you should definitely check it out.

Not much to say here it is a great novel with good prospects in future development and a good theme. I would write more about why this novel is good and whatnot but that is too long. JUST READ IT! Even if it is just the 39 free chapters, it will allow you to understand the story and see where it is developing and hopefully you will like it.Hope it gets selected.

Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potential

It took me a while to understand the storyline, but luckily I have a little background in games. It's also a new challenge for me who is a romance crazed to read this new genre.But good work so far! Keep on writing!

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Author I am loving your novel I've read to chapter 120 but some areas stands out in your story the annoys me a bit. The part that annoys me is the Mc choices, he refuses at times to use his full power were it can help him avoid trouble or escape. He lets his emotions rule over him a lot, this is explained by his past but it still doesn't feel like he is gaining control over it or improving his control over his emotions. The novel is good and i would hate for you to stop or quit, keep up the great work.