Honestly, I have loved it so far. Keep up the good work author!
The story is not original. The change of new times has already been much better worked. The MC is terribly flat and unambitious. The secondary including his family are providers and nothing more, he has no personality or charisma, if the story followed a better pace I could ignore it but the background is even worse than the characters, maybe if at least there was comic relief if it held up as a story to read in a queue or traffic jam.
Seriously Man! Are you really calling these less than 200 words a chapters? ?
QILIN REALM-- THE WORD BUILD IS AMAZING. gotta say the writers worked really hard, the descriptions and the cover, the synopsis and the plot, the pace, its all commendable! i'd love seeing more content, tried my best to not spoil this stuff but id love to complete this book as soon as my tests are done with!
Hello, I do not have vast experience in writing novels, but I do know that every opinion and review is valuable. Therefore, I would take this chance and express my thoughts about this story.
First, there are no significant grammatical errors in the story. There may be some in each chapter, but it does not hinder understanding the flow of events.
As for the development of the story, I think that while it's great and well thought out, there are chapters that are 'somewhat' insignificant to the story that I think can be described in shorter words. This is also related to another issue regarding this novel. I don't think I have the qualifications to advise a writer since I have no experience regarding that. But, as a reader, I think that the author likes to give too much detail in describing things in the story. For example, the author will explain the logic behind something that still has no significant role in the current phase of the story. I think that instead of going into too much detail as something was introduced, it would have been better to just give some overview regarding it until it becomes significant to the story so that you can describe these efficiently and timely. Why am I giving such a fuss regarding it? It's because I think highly of the story and it drives me mad to see the story progress, but it irks me that some chapters that aren't too far from being cheap fillers are present. It's good to present the story of side characters, but going into so much depth that causes the story to somewhat lose its luster is not very good.
As for the character design. In my opinion, the author did very well in describing and giving color to the characters. Each of them has their personality and identity, causing their interactions with each other very lifelike.
As for the updating stability, I have no issue or opinion regarding that.
Lastly, for the world background, the author did excellently. The author did not give too much nor too little information, instead providing just enough description about the world and its power structure.
Overall, I think that the story is good and is worth a while. The only problem is still the use of too much info in describing certain things and the chapters that resemble cheap fillers.
I must say this was a good read so far , looking forward to the new chapters that are to come.Its good to see a story where the MC isn't some young master who tries to get stronger for any reason like saving a girl or revenge. Also, not like a lot of the newer novels where MC is an evil being that goes around causing chaos.I believe, so far, this novel is going in the direction of a type of novel I have wanted to read but have yet to find , where MC just lives to improve himself while being able to live longer than others.I must say it would be good if MC could stay neutral and that we can just experience his life improving as well as his journeys through space and different worlds.Keep up the good work!
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i will drop this novel not because the story is bad but because the translation is very very poor the first 200 chapters the quality of translation was excellent, but suddenly dropped, which upset me very much and this is why i dropped this novel
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I have been following this work for a few months now and can’t get enough of it. The two lead characters are strong, witty and have good chemistry. The world has just the right amount of conflict to keep you engaged and the story seems to be progressing at a good pace.Keep it up author!