YuoHuyao
The story is good, the only thing that bothers me is that the authors put a supposed transmigrated of the land who read novels about cultivation, but they always do it stupid and it seems that he forgets how high the level of a cultivator can be, One thing is that I do not know up to what level this world can reach, but being surprised by a cultivator 1 or 2 levels higher than him bothers me a lot, they only put the transmigrator to call attention but then they develop the character as if he was one more of that world and as if all the knowledge of his previous world was erased
Great story development.... Love the charactersThe only problem about this novel would be the late update period.....and I feel the story could be more realistic and mature rather than the normal cliche scene
The book started really good at first. The ideas were interesting and engaging at first. However, as the story progresses, I feel the author is becoming too long winded in explaining simple things that won't really matter in the long run. Author also likes to overexplain learning of skills that won't really be useful or meaningful in the future as well. Sadly I have to drop this story after 72 chapters.
The worst part of this novel is not the lack of originality but the lack of any sense, how you expect someone let you stab even if they are sworn brothers? And why did you tell the other guy stabs you if you’re gonna change of heart and stab him back? This novel’s appalling... spare the time and chose some other novel if you enjoy the genre.
A really good book to read if you like vrmmorpg and like smart characters read the first 10 chapters and you will like it.
Translation-okay,Updating stability-okay,Story Development-okay,Character Design-Okay,World Backround-okay.Well I was just thinking its about time I make a review for this good novel,1st its like Terror infinity and Ultimate evolution because of its entry based model but also different because in TI and UE the stories is based on movies,differrent because in this novel in every dungeon there is also story and its original made by the author not something copied from others,2nd as far as the story goes its good the MC is not that strong in the beginning he's power is earn through hardwork and challenging risk to earn better rewards he also know how to use all of his advantage,3rd ehhh im waiting for more!!!!!,for those who read this review right now i dont see anything wrong with this novel so I Highly Recommend it,thats all.
Thank goodness,That he doesn't said all women are mine! !????????????????✨✨✨✨??✨✨?????????????????????✨✨✨
This is a story about some one sacrificing his life and positive emotions to achieve highest talent in swords. Unlike typical xianxia this mc is like a yong master OP, lot of resources, protection from elders, good background, all of them are present for him. Still this is one of the best novels of all times.
First of all don’t judge this novel based on author’s previous work. This novel is totally different and it is unbelievable how an author could improve so much.I will do this review in two parts, first part is for first 400 chapters and second part is for rest of the chapters.First half of the novel is full of political intrigue, strategical battles and lots of scheming. Our MC is shameless, petty, revengeful, narcissistic flower boy. He is extremely intelligent with no physical power at all.He becomes son-in-law and helps his wife’s household to go through their difficulties. First half of the novel is all about rising in political ladder and a bit of knowing the world. World is mysterious, with lots of hidden mysteries. THE ONLY THING I HATE ABOUT FIRST HALF IS useless, stupid references. SO MANY REFERENCES!!!! SO MANY REFERENCES!!! SO MANY REFERENCES!!! I mean 35 out of 100 (I.E 35% or less of first half) chapters are only about references.Second half isn’t that much about politics it is about MC knowing the mysteries of the ancient civilization, their extraordinary inventions, unearthing them and studying them. Using their technology and modern earth technology to create something new. Our MC doesn’t become strong until last 100 chapters of the novel.The second half of the novel is about mysteries and some sci fi elements are involved. There is a huge twist in the end involving everything that happened throughout the novel. The ending is not bad but it does not do justice to the novel.In the end novel becomes somewhat of sci fi genre. And If you know little about science then maybe you will find ideas of author little stupid and preposterous. But for me it was in bearable range.
1- The MC Personality make the story interesting2- The story line start slow but after a few chapters you get cough in the plot.3- No complains about the translation, the story is clear and I'm able to follow the author though 4- there is enough twist in this story to keep you glue to your table5- Please do not pay attention to the synopsis I think it is to abstract and someone need to write a new one.6- in overall this novel is worth your time.
So far in my opinion, chapter 1-20 is pretty much garbage, while at the same time it is not the ultra wish-fulfillment side of the usual Chinese novels, it is the wish-fulfillment side of the be good and do good faction. In other words a whole 180-degree turn from the worst. The author deliberately mentions things he tries to avoid and things he would like to do and the result? Just get dragged around by some random people he despises. No logic in there and simply be there in order to look good and for the plot to advance. Worst thing is that the author goes out of his way to make the protagonist say one thing to the audience while at the same time EXACTLY advancing and forcing the plot in a direction that is completely the opposite of the things that the protagonist should do according to its characterization. Chapter 20-30 is pretty okay, still cliche, and acceptable in my mind. It promises what it delivers, stops going out of its way to make the protagonist a useless piece of shit. Albeit not the best character, it doesn't follow the usual bullshit so far. Bullshit from Chapter 1-20: 4-5 times saying that one should not do that, it is dangerous and the protagonist knows that this is dumb stuff. Proceeds to do that exact thing. Chapter 30 onwards: Pretty decent. Still a little bit of cliche but with better character introduction, a general storyline that makes sense and actually makes me think this might be worth reading. Heck, the Chapter 30 onwards make it seem like the first 20 were deliberately written so badly so that people avoid this book. Advice: Skip the first 20 Chapters, it is a lot as this book only has 60 chapters so far but the first arcs are absolute garbage. It becomes almost a whole different book past these chapters.
Author note: Because I hate info-dumping and useless magic systems I decided to make this book. I have plans for it to run for a long time because I also enjoy the story! For me, it's like daydreaming my childhood fantasies but also being able to share them with you!So come over and start the tale!.
