It was a thrilling start. I expect even more thrills later on. Hope I'll get to see lots of interesting characters and enjoy a good story onward. I'll be looking forward to it.
I actually think that this is a nice book,its exploration on the matters of romance is quite interesting . I recommend it as a must-read for all.
What I have gathered from reading this first few chapters is as follows. The writing quality is quite high and the story development is extremely strong. However, as is the case with most original novels on Qidian, the story flows too fast, not leaving enough time for the reader to take it all in through the large paragraphs of information. Hence I suggest making your paragraphs smaller. The character design could use a little improvement, mainly in the sense of increasing the back stories of the various characters . But the world background is also quite good and fairly fleshed out. Good job if this is your first novel, I'll be favouriting this one.
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I have read a few chapters and it seems like a great idea for a story but the author is using other famous books for dumb ideas. What author is like he cant be named and then names him. The super evil villan is Zac?!? What kind of evil name is that. Plus the author needs an editor since his english is so bad. Overall the story should use the author for ideas but have someone else write the actual novel. ?
honestly a great and entertaining book that gets constant updates and is interesting enough to keep you reading no matter what I love it personally
I liked the premise but after reading 25 chapters, the novel is more of a vrmmo wuxia novel with too few actual "constable" work. Thus far, it has developed like the stereotypical wuxia novel with all the damsels-in-distress type stuff and I kinda just got bored of it.
Aaaa, I'm still quite new to the book but it most definitely took a spot in both my favourites list and my heart! I really like how this time the ML is the innocent(or more like just confused on what us 'commoners' do/use and stuff) one? It's really cute how he doesn't seem to understand most things and MC ends up just being his teacher and it's really?? I can't seem to describe it?? It's really cute and worth reading!
What to say god I fell in love with this novel, a pity that they do not give importance to translate, and webnovel values more silly novels than this type of entertaining works ???????????
This novel is popping, I must reccomend this to everyone........................................................................................................
can feel potential .. could be better .. but like the idea . .... . ...............................................................................................
pretty normal Chinese cultivation story involving transmigrated person, low quality translation and edit. I suggest you don't read this novel.