Zack and Chai each relied on their feelings and familiarity towards Melissa.
⚠️Soft-Ntr chapter 5⚠️Mc girlfriend that he’s been with for 4 years and Mc is a absolute simp during that time, she leaves him for rich guy. Then in chapter 5 she comes back to the mcs apartment to collect her clothes with her new boyfriend, and that guy brags about how he took his ex-gf virginity and how the mc is a broke boy.He has a really cool ability but the mc himself ruins it. Mc is also very passive when it comes to dealing with threats, since it takes an entire 25 chapters after the rich boyfriend of his ex is introduced and him blackmailing the mc for the mc to finally have the balls to deal with him.And this brings me to the next part that made me drop. (This happens right after he kills the rich boyfriend) he spends so much time thinking about how to kill him and not leave evidence and has the idea to use his power to control stray dogs (great idea) then he lures the dogs while being completely hidden in his car and finally the dogs kill the guy… Then the mcs brain just stops working and he WALKS up to the body and calls the cops???? The cops come and question him and obviously he has a motive to kill him even if it was done by dogs. And you’ll never believe what the author cooks up in his meth lab that happens next. The damn police RECOGNIZES THE STRAY DOG WTF.The police then go to the place and pull surveillance and fin the mc there aswell…..I am not waiting around to see what other room temp iq brain bleed plans the author cooks up next
I love books about vampires with systems, and this one is kinda of my best so far, keep up the good work, you might actually turn a sociopath to your fan with this, because you are the best psychopath ever, this book is amazing it official am a fan
Truly one of a kind book where Cultivation meet with magic power system. I am currently at chapter 55. Will definitely come back here when the chapters piled up. Like 100ish maybe? Anyway, it's a solid cultivation book, filled with treacherous journey, heart-wrenching plot wist, charavcter development is solid and not rushed.
this is good to readd guyyyss!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm really enjoying this book it's my first time reading about cultivation stuff, and I find it quite interesting. thank you, author, for the consistent uploads ?????u200d↕️
Life lessons learnt. Very instructive and educational in piece . I am using the lessons learnt to teach and enlighten my children. Experience they say is the best teacher. If you aren't patient enough you end up on the wrong side of life
The story line is unique in it own way, I must appreciate the Author on this nice piece of his. I'm also hoping that we get more chapters, I so like the story and the characters too.
Finally found a good VILLAIN Novel where MC is smart and does things all wishes to see. Good World Background development. Better than most of those "villain face-slapping protagonists" plots. Has its own pace which is appreciated rather than rushing to take down children of destiny.
I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it.Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations.Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work.Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire? lol). However, from what I've seen, the book at the very least has potential. It's just up to the author to do what he can to bring out the full potential of this book. Many will gravitate to it if this is done right. I am certain of that.Character Design: I don't usually mark for this because it's up to the reader's preferences sometimes, whether or not they want described characters or if they wish to use their imagination. However, I'm a fan of descriptive writing. It brings flair and pizazz. Updating Stability: From what I've seen so far, updates are constant enough. The author doesn't lag very much. Readers will appreciate that.World Background: IMO, could use a little more flavor. I hope I'm not forgetting anything cause I tend to have a forgetful memory when it comes to smaller details. However, the world background isn't bad but it could use more. As stated before, I'm a fan of descriptive writing so yeah.Overall: This book isn't bad and it has potential without a doubt. Currently, to be 100% honest, it doesn't seem all that binge-worthy to me as I could hardly find much motivation to read more than 2 chapters a day (But don't let this bother you. Few books give me that binge-worthy feeling). However, as stated before, the book has potential and the author seems creative enough to go further. Readers, support the author and you'll have a FANTASTIC story. Message to the author: I know writing can be difficult, speaking from my experiences. However, don't give up. If you enjoy writing then keep at it and you'll get better without a shadow of the doubt. You'll sometimes see collections fluctuate. Today you might gain 3 then tomorrow you lose 4. But that's all part of the process. Don't be afraid of going back through older chapters and making adjustments if you deem it necessary. And most of all, don't give up. Remember this always; if you don't like the story you're writing then there's a high chance that the readers won't either. So have confidence and good luck!
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Its lol type novel and i have never play lol before so i don't understand what are they even saying so if you are lol fan go for this novel.