Interesting read. However, the dialogue sometimes a bit confusing tbh. Hopefully they continue the translation as reading a story without knowing its ending would leave kinda bad aftertaste. The title is obvious maybe, but still I want to experience reading the process.
anyone else unhappy with being required to pay spirit stones to read chapters? last chapter I read required 13... Every day I check in I get 10 spirit stones. at the end of the day, those stones go away. So I need to lose on spirit stones, eventually having to actually buy them, just to read the chapters.... I liked it better when I could just agree to watch an ad.
I like the story, because the MC is more realistic than normal xianwu MCs. Although the system is very similar to Ultimate Scheming System, there are differences.
This book is so nice! I love it…
i really like how Alice took revenge on both of them but too harsh punishment for Anna. she could have taken revenge took everything from them and let them go than hurting Anna to this extent proves she is worse than them.
I have throughly enjoyed all of this authors books.
another masterpiece <3
You repeat the same things few times Avoid it
a lovely short story I really like this book and it was really nice how they put everyone together
lovely short Story
I need to talk about the Litang bus journey because this is where the author really flexes. Seven hours. Seven. Hours. of winding mountain roads and the author could have just summarized it in a paragraph and moved on. Instead? We get the motion sickness. The headache. The way the scenery blurs into this dizzying river of green and blue and white. And then — the moment the driver yells "We're here!" and Lin Mo opens her eyes and forgets half her discomfort. That pivot is everything. The author uses physical suffering as a pacing device, making you feel the weight of the journey so that when Litang appears, it actually lands. It's the same technique used earlier with the Chengdu-to-Kangding drive, where both girls suffer from motion sickness and drift between sleep and wakefulness. The author isn't hiding the boring parts — he's using them. Building anticipation through discomfort. And then there's the Danzeng intercut scenes. He's in his luxury apartment, drinking alone, scrolling social media for the first time in who-knows-how-long, and stops on one photo. The contrast between his sterile, paid-for-with-hard-work apartment and Lin Mo's messy, beautiful journey is doing a lot of structural work here. The chapters alternate between her physical journey and his emotional one, and the pacing never drags because each section ends on a note that makes you want to keep going. Even the restaurant scene where they can't stop eating — no dialogue, just chopsticks and bubbling broth — that's deliberate pacing. Letting the reader breathe between plot points.
I originally don't want David to be a womanizer but if the story keeps on revolving about this matter better make him have them all and proceed to a more exciting journey.