I love the beginning of this novel; how the writer immediately pulls us into the story's world. The narration and descriptions are great and the character development is simply amazing.
Have read until chapter 419The concept of the story is not bad.The MC is OP, but not overly OP. Some anoying ticks of the MC, ofcourse.The world background is sometimes a bit unclear and/ or contradicting if i remember correctly. Have been binge reading so the details are a bit fuzzy.The translation is not bad, but either the author or the translator has/had a limited vocabolary or did not know how and where to use some words, such as frantically. It is used everywhere in every situation insted of quicly, hurriedly, anxiously etc. this applies for the first 300 chapters.The translation after chapter 300, which just reacently started again is much worse. Names are sometimes translated/ used differently in 3 following paragrapghs, without capital letters for the first name/ surname etc. The pronouns He/She is not used incorrectly and just plastered wherever. I strongly believe that this must be machine translated without editing as if you actually read the chapters after translation, you would correct the words according to the setting of the story, or I at least would hope they had enough pride in their work to do so. The way the dialogs are written are also a bit weird and "placed" weirdly, aswell as sometimes the same persons dialog is splitt up weirdly'....."'........" which makes reading much harder and less enjoyable. Although i know it is a translated novel site which I chose myself and it is up to me to choose to spend money on it or not, I still feel a bit scamed when they use machine translation, or translate it on that kind of lvl.
The book is pretty good. The start was above average, OP MC might not be for everyone but the author handled it right at the beginning . The characters, main and side, started developing nicely. The story line was good too, plenty of mystery and story lines to keep you
Pedophile piece of garbage. I don't understand how people like garbage like this. MC gets an 8 year old little girl as a pet and keeps mention how she's a gorgeous loli.
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just from the syp I can tell she was a childhood friend. and you just killed her........I FUCKING LOVE YOU ❤❤❤ take my 5 stars just for that
The first 60 chapters were nothing but constant exposition. It's one thing to introduce the world it's another thing to continue explaining everything every single chapter. Nothing notable so far just standard for the genre.
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I really loved the beginning, the mc was cold, had a special background and wasn't stupid but then everything began to become sh*t when the shameless bunch appeared, they are extremely annoying:-first they just tried to kill him and steal his game. ->then mc just forgave them for no valid reason.-then they followed him and invited themselves at his home. ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason -then they were bold enough to look into his private stuff (while knowing his personnality). ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason-he tries to work but gets interrupted again ->but still forgave them for no valid reason Also the most annoying girl magically falls in love with the mc while having known him for less than a week. In the beginning you feel like mc's coldness and ruthless personnality is legitimate but then he just lets the shameless bunch do what they want and constantly gets pushed around by their behaviour and requests, while having massacred the kids who tried to kill him he tolerates worse people for longer for no reson, he is totally illogical, the plot feels too forced because of all of the inconsistencies in this story and it becomes total sh*t after that because of the annoying bunch.It just becomes too frustrating to read this when you see the mc getting pushed around by shameless people and not do anything to them while still agreeing to their shameless requests.Many will drop this like me because of this part of the story. It began real good but became total sh*t because of only 5 chapters.
????????????I just love this book; You're doing a really great job author, keep it upAnd please don't drop it????????? ???
After all the things ive read normally drawing a conclusion to which is the best book was extremely difficult, however now that ive read this i can certainly place this in the top two if not first place.