Not going to lie, when you asked if I wanted to read this I didn't have high expectations but... I was thoroughly surprised. The prologue showed a great hook, I could feel her terror almost, the moment she gave up and decided to flee, the hopes that were given and taken from us... and then the MC's anger over things I won't spoil. You do a great job of building a world and setting a mood. I can't think of any complaints beyond I want to see more about your characters and when's the next chapter out, I NEEDS IT! You don't need to hear it from me, but I'm going to say it anyway. I love your work.
