Actually quite good, the cheat isn't as unbalanced as the synopsis makes it seem. It's not like he goes from trash to best in his school in 3 chapters. Cultivation system is rather interesting, with a heavy focus on the spirit roots.NU rating would be 4.0 ish
A promising novel hopefully it isn't dropped as I'm starting to really enjoy it and most other non human or gender bender novels I'm reading have been dropped or have started to upload less and less.
I wish the updates were quicker but that’s about it. I quite like it the system is new and somewhat cool, I would really really enjoy more. I suppose the plot could move quicker, feels like we’re on th same thing for five chapters.
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So 3 things here:1. Idk if I've been living under the rock but this is the first time I've heard about a video game novel ~ very interesting ?2. I love the character design esp Osho as I find him handsome mehe :33. Storyline is fun, looks promising! I'm enjoying every chapter! Love your work, Author! Keep it up, cheers! ?
----------------------Story DevelopmentCharacter Design ------------> GarbageWorld Background --------------------Just like some trash ones, they'll hook you in the beginning and then it goes downhill. Is this a novel or a comments forum?!?!?! Our mc is one of those janitors who clean trash, have fun reading, if anyone is actually, other than the water army
I don't know why there is so many 5 stars, the author keeps ignoring the details, early in the story it he gets and equipment for level 10 when he is lvl 9 and equips it, MC has around 250hp regen and gets a weapon that consumes 300hp/s and doesnt die. around chapter 50 he is fithing a boss that has 70k hp and somehow mc manages to do 100k dmg and boss still not dead until mc does 21k more dmg
I have read some of its chapters and ........the result was what you would expect from a game system novel. It starts with Mc being sent to another world and he gets a system. but as he was weak as a worm in that world so the system gave him so much pleasant surprises that even I was shocked....he was given an ability to escape 5 km in an instant. then he levels up because of assuming a haughty pose before two experts....weird, right? but the story is all about the Mc acting tough and I like that as it is a little out of the box thinking by the author......and I wish that this novel comes out soon.
The story is good and well developed, I like the design of the world, the story line and all but what I don't like and let me be honest, is the character designs. I mean, the characters are okay and all but I don't like how the woman flick all over him, he goes around and each woman just throw themselves into his arms, just like he goes picking flower into a garden, it's really really frustrating, he doesn't even know how to reject those women who make him feel irritated, annoyed and all, I have read countless similar novels and really is making me feel irritated with reading more, but the only thing that keeps me in continue reading it is because the story developments is quite good. author if I have to say something it would be, if you wanted to write a sexual story it's okay but why do you have to write just about harems in novels as good as this, at least make the protagonist able to reject every woman' approach.I would say if I were Lin Xuan, I would immediately reject every woman because every woman just stick to him because he is powerful, because of his resources or because thinking that sticking to him they could obtain new opportunities, thinking that their love for Lin Xuan is without interest on his resources or in his opportunities, thinking that they are with him because of his good personality, his kindness for saving them, but not knowing that what they really covet is the opportunities he brings with him. Lin Xuan sure knows but still keeps an eyes blind and let them come to him. If I were him I would rather throw that bunch of covetous woman, I would better continue training and what is more I would break the engagement with Xuan Xinran (or so was the name) at the moment I could talk or turn adult, giving my opinion of her shameless behavior in breaking an engagement that was already set just for him what is worse is she was so shamelessly breaking it because of a baby, she seems like a pedophile.
Due to the recent toxic comment(s) from a handful of readers (or an alt from a hater), it has come to me that some readers might have misunderstood the concept of this novel.Therefore, I'm putting this review as a disclaimer, so these readers who are expecting a certain type of MC or a type of story can understand what they are getting into. And then, when they start flaming, I can just remind them of their ignorance. What you will NOT see in this novel.1. Fast-paced story2. OP MC at the beginning of the story3. Unyielding MC that refuses to bow down to anyone.4. An evil MC that violates laws and order at the early story.5. A Mary Sue, Gary Stu, Kirito-like MC that infinitely gains instant powerup without having to work hard. 6. An alpha MC that has a perfect personality and makes perfect decisions in every action.7. A ruthless, reckless, and brainless MC that goes around and provoke everyone left and right because of a trivial matter. 8. Humorless dark story. What you will SEE in this novel.1. Slow-paced story.2. An MC that understands these words and can put them into practice; "Compromise
Retard ended the novel half assed such a shame