The story is good and well developed, I like the design of the world, the story line and all but what I don't like and let me be honest, is the character designs. I mean, the characters are okay and all but I don't like how the woman flick all over him, he goes around and each woman just throw themselves into his arms, just like he goes picking flower into a garden, it's really really frustrating, he doesn't even know how to reject those women who make him feel irritated, annoyed and all, I have read countless similar novels and really is making me feel irritated with reading more, but the only thing that keeps me in continue reading it is because the story developments is quite good. author if I have to say something it would be, if you wanted to write a sexual story it's okay but why do you have to write just about harems in novels as good as this, at least make the protagonist able to reject every woman' approach.I would say if I were Lin Xuan, I would immediately reject every woman because every woman just stick to him because he is powerful, because of his resources or because thinking that sticking to him they could obtain new opportunities, thinking that their love for Lin Xuan is without interest on his resources or in his opportunities, thinking that they are with him because of his good personality, his kindness for saving them, but not knowing that what they really covet is the opportunities he brings with him. Lin Xuan sure knows but still keeps an eyes blind and let them come to him. If I were him I would rather throw that bunch of covetous woman, I would better continue training and what is more I would break the engagement with Xuan Xinran (or so was the name) at the moment I could talk or turn adult, giving my opinion of her shameless behavior in breaking an engagement that was already set just for him what is worse is she was so shamelessly breaking it because of a baby, she seems like a pedophile.
