Addicting to read. From the novels I've read prior, the world setting gives it a fresh take, on an old story. The MC development is great. It even attempts to make the side characters more interesting. The only knock for that is the love interest, seems forced and out of place imo. Which is normal it's a martial arts novel, I wouldn't expect Romeo and Juliet esque writing I suppose. The fight scenes aren't overly drawn out, which has been a pet peeve for me in other novels, I blame DBZ for this. I don't know what more to say, I just felt it deserves 5 stars. Give it a read, if after 20 chapters you aren't hooked...
Just reading the synopsis got me hooked. A definite addition to my library. Also feels a bit fresh compared to other system novels on Web novel. Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
It's a novel that started with fiery scenes and then stabilized through interconnected but easily followed mysteries. I love the main characters. They have no trust issue whatsoever. At least they won't fight over a very stupid misunderstanding. Er actually, they never even fight against each other. They only make love haha. But seriously, the story is a gem, whether you skip the rated scenes or not. If I would say, it's not mainstream. It uses the system niche. But the system in here has a lovable and hateful personality, maybe the closest one I know is the system in When a Mage Revolts. MC has reasonable growth pace, imo. Also, she's not someone who just do what her system asked her to do. She weigh things out whether it's moral or not. ML is mysterious, but not overbearing, tsundere, unreasonable, prone to misunderstadingsSide characters are also not static characters. They also grow and change. And they each have defined characteristics.Villains are of course hateful. But thankfully, their ends are not cliche haha.
this is trash indeed, with many loopholes and error logic
The reason I'm giving this a such low review is that everything is so simple and underdeveloped. The MC is op which is fine but the way you write him. He seems kinda single-sided. The storyline with Rumi needs to be developed more because even though they are soulmates they still need a more detailed love story. The writing quality is really simple, but it's your first fanfic so I can't blame you. I know that's it is hard to write them but just try to make the story feel real. The character design needs work to because Rumi seems like a simpleminded character.
I've been a fan of the author for a while and I love how his story telling and writing style went up from good to great in less than a year. im really looking forward to where this novel goes and enjoying the graphic fights along the way.
I am giving this a one star just from the synopsis. Like what is the mc’s gender!? Boy or girl? Like wtf! And there were some VERY clear grammar errors showing the author didn’t even bother with the synopsis. Cough* capitalization errors. Honestly, not going to read and just going to leave a bad review. You are very welcome.
Very unique and interesting reincarnation story that I hope the author takes in a good direction. Interesting even though so far it’s just a rock going around on a Hadean era-esque planet. Really hope that once the author moves in and gets their stuff set up they can update this regularly. 4/5 Definitely recommend
I like it so far and that system seems like an interesting "character". lowkey wanna see how this is gonna go. I'll be waiting for more updates author.
Just amazing!!! I recommend, the world is interesting, the characters are fascinating especially the mc, I love overpowered main character, and the story is truly captivating, plus fantasy is my thing
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
I’m not writing another review for this novel because I believe I already did.First of all... LonelyTree is the best translator. He(she?) reads and likes all the recent comments in the recent novels. He/she doesn’t just read the top 3, he/she read ALL. Such dedication. I hope LonelyTree gets more recognized for his/her translated works(because ALL of them are in my library) and his communication with the readers. I heart this novel.... around other people who don’t look dangerous and not late at night like now. I hate reading this novel on a cliffhanger because it haunts me.