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"Yes but actually no"
"N" leans in, biting onto one finger, awaiting more information.
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"Tenth time. Hohohohoho, I don't want that," Shaggy said.
Due to the lack of funds and power, Dishi went to the military despite having only the basics of martial arts. He understood quickly that he had to make his own fortune and being in the military was the easiest option compare to living off his family, being a scholar, or hoping to be married to a rich noble lady. There were too many sons in the Fu Family and most of them were greedy for power and money.
This story of amazing. In fact it's so good, I'm seriously worried the author won't be able to maintain the quality for long, and these web novels all need several hundred chapters to really show their writers flaws.Good amounts of steampunk, lovecraft horror, and humor. The pacing is great. The mysticism scenes are obscure enough to keep the element of mystery and uncertainty, but still concrete enough to feel like there's something there.One of my favorite parts of the story so far is that humans wielding supernatural power causes them to start hearing voices and increasingly likely to go insane. I think it's an excellent balance to typical cultivation novels, where the conflict basically revolves around ruthless greed.The other favorite part is probably the little sister. The author better not let anything bad happen to her. Wait, does that make me a vicarious siscon!? No it's not like that I swear!
"That's my baby sister." Aaron signed. Jackson nodded, looking back at Emilia with calculated eyes.
"One life for a good lesson to all your other disciples is a good trade I will say. You know you cannot stop even if try." The kid's killing intent piling up, and his aura grows suppressing the blue aura of the patriarch's.
this story book has a super slow start to it.
here is a review.......................
Romance?Wanted to know if you plan to add romance in your novel
Very very Dog-**** start the earlier chapters just plainly showed the author just put what he wanted and it was very inconsistent as well, character building yes there is, character design? My answer to that is negative, I mean why design a bloody ass S-ranked reincarnator when his experiences are just plain ****, can't be used. I mean the boy has no determination, no perseverance, no traits whatsoever that should be shown before he was reincarnated with his memories. I mean not just that, the grammar isnt getting any better at all like what the actual F***. The Author says that he is training his writing skills, truth is, he says he is Brazilian and we should forgive him for typos when he gives absolutely no fucks about improving and just says those at the end of the chapter to have an excuse at not correcting his grammar mistakes. He hasn't improved at all and I don't know how people can manage to give this a 5 star I mean full of inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, hypocrite-like author and worst of all he doesn't even bother improving and just uses excuses.
