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YOU. ARE. THE. DEAD. Oh my God. I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in Newspeak "Double Plus Good."
Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried.
This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics, not to mention a fully developed language called Newspeak, or rather more of the anti-language, whose purpose is to limit speech and understanding instead of to enhance and expand it.
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Well, if you can get past the initial 80 or so chapters, the novel is a pretty decent read. Were it not for my usual habit of reading 100 chapters before deciding whether or not to proceed, I honestly would’ve long dropped this because of the many contradictory factors/inconsistencies and the amount of frustration felt when reading a novel in which the MC didn’t feel like the protagonist in his very own story. Almost every single thing that was brought up was deemed a mystery in which it seemed like everyone else but the MC was aware of what was going on. Novel didn’t really take a turn until the MC was reborn, as in when he got the wyvern’s heart. From that point on, the novel became a lot more bearable and increasingly interesting. I like the way things are progressing as of now as nothing feels either too fast or slow, well at least in regards to the MC’s leveling up progress. Though I do feel that the plot itself could move at a somewhat slower/steady pace because I feel that too many things have happened and been thrown at us since he was “reborn”. Anyhow, even if things continue as is, I don’t have much to complain about.
The idea is kinda interesting and good but the author failed tl create real characters since they all feel unrealistic and dumb.I read until chapter 19, i will continue until 40 to see if it changes
Very good premise, and the story started out strong. As it goes, however, the story becomes extremely frustrating to read. The main character's decisions seem forced and pretty obviously non-optimal given the information provided. Not to mention weird inclusion of a gun that seemed extremely out of place and forced for no reason. Also, every character besides the MC seems to be omniscient, as they either already have all the MCs info, or gain it nearly immediately. MC seems to simultaneously have amazing cheats and yet remain infuriatingly underpowered despite obvious methods of powering up. Dropped bc it legit made my blood pressure go up. I wanted to like it so badly, but I just couldn't. Huge disappointment.
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Not that fan of fantasy but well, assasin things captured my heart especially that I found this kind of novel already. Can’t wait for the chapter updates. Nice one Author! ??❤️
Shameless author here :)Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!- "First of all, what is this book about?" It's about a guy named Sunny who lives in a dystopian future where some people are forced to periodically visit a magical world and battle terrible monsters. If they survive, they receive special powers.- "What type of guy is Sunny?" He is a cynical, disillusioned young man with a bleak outlook on life. But! He has a sense of humor and a strong desire to not only survive but also thrive in this world. You'll like him, I promise.- "Will he be overpowered?" Not really. He will certainly become powerful, but not powerful enough to steamroll over his enemies. Every victory Sunny achieves will be won with cunning, hard work, and skill. So, more of a Dark Souls type of situation.- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but a slow one.- "Romance, you say! So... a harem? There is a harem, right?" Not really. Sunny will be surrounded by a lot of beautiful people, both male a female, but he will probably only have one romantic relationship. Uh... one at a time, at least. We'll see!- "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing one chapter every day. The amount may increase in the future, but it depends on a lot of factors.- And, finally... "Aren't you too full of yourself? You rated your book five stars!" What can I say, it's a great book. One of the best books I've ever written! I've only written one other book, but still. It's definitely one of the top two best books I've written in my life. If you don't believe me, check for yourself ;)
god, this story is so bad that I just had to give it a 1 star reviewfirst chapter is a liestory is inconsistent as fdon't waste your time
interesting at first, but it become boring when the story start kingdom building (political battle).
i thought he will first save his parent then adventure it become similar to the first hunter manwha with wide system functions and world building.
