I like the way you wrote it, it's very clear and easy to understand. after all this novel is promising story. I love the characters and looking forward to them. keep it up!
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The story in the first few chapters was amazing. A traumatized character, a war against powerful aliens, strange powers and a promise of revenge. But after he meets Liiza the focus of the story completely changes. Hundreds of chapters describing the love relationship between Khan and Liiza, made me so bored. I can't read a story that ignores everything else and focuses on the romance between a human and an alien. It's sad, the action and adventure promised in the first chapters was completely in the background. The author should change the name of the story to "MY GIRLFRIEND IS AN ALIEN" It will make more sense to new readers. In short, the story is amazing, the author writes very well, but he focused on the romance. Someone like it, but I just got bored.
This is it. The author had to have put crack cocaine in this book with how good it is. The intrigue, use of suspense, worldbuilding, schemes e.t.c everything about this book is done well; I even dare say this book is better than tyranny of steel, that’s how good it is. I highly recommend it any prospective readers.
This novel is so good, it makes my day..........................................................................................................
Heesha is the best after the best author you deserve all the rank here just mysterious how mysterious it is ?????
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I absolutely love this book its one of the best ive read so far. Please keep up the good work and keep writing more, I would love to read more of your work
The story itself is pretty good. There are some obvious situations very similar to other novels but it has quite a lot of potential in my opinion.
There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers.
The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive.
I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better.
Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.
Gran Novela, recomiendo que sigáis con el resto del universo de douluo dalu, a cada cual mejor, en la segunda mejora mucho la escritura, mucho mas fluida y con menos parones
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Why the **** does this novel have low ratings?
Really good. There is a unique premise and even if the mc is strong since the beginning there is a power accumulation. The only problem is the author wasn't satisfied so he dropped the novel literally at the middle. The author had 2 volumes planned but when he ended the first he just dropped...
Still it is a good novel, but unfortunately with a disappointing ending.