this is great and I love it, I hope author doesn't run out of ideas and add unnecessary stuff like a harem or romance, or maybe make modifs to to the system(this one might be necessary depending)
I mean it's OK and all but I can't take how the character acts. he is just so stupid and he basically has no balls and just does whatever a woman wants him to do
Character Development? Check
System? Check
World Travel? Check
Action? Check
Strong Enemies? Check
Powerful cheats? Check
Inheritances? Check
Strong Female Lead? Check
Atlas Studios so I already know without reading it that after chapter 40 it'll be straight mtl without any editing. Stay away from Atlas Studios because they've ruined two novels that I actually tried before having to drop at 41 due to this.
Also, I mean how can someone actually release 70 chapters a week, you have to be kidding.
One of the best webnovels. I really love how the MC changes drastically from being weak to being confident and strong. This book is really interesting.
This is just garbage
Don't even waste your time
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Fun and he doesn’t keep a low profile which is the source of much annoyance in other novels.. also his system is heaven defying but he doesn’t immediately recieve the highest level spirit root but has to work at it.. the translation is good if a bit stunted at times but there are no obvious mistakes.. more please
Really enjoy this novel and the other novel you have written so far. Keep up the good work.
I like the person's background and the character. I think this has a lot of potential! Good start, may the writing Gods bless you with motivation and creativity to continue! I'm still starting a lot of writing projects like this, get excited and then lose it after the first few chapters, so I hope you have a better time than I do!
Writing Quality: The grammar is little confusing and the author made pretty much a lot of mistake while writing
Stability of updates: Don't know if the author is still writing this story he probably quit after 23 chapter
Story development: it's fine not too bad but what I'm not satisfy in this story is the character habit in scratching their head's seriously? If the author decide to continue this story I suggest him don't make them scratch their head's too often
Character design: not bad the only problem is the enemies their facing are a little limited in names for example a rat named Mouse mickey are you serious? XD and I saw change a girl name from Violet to Chrissy whats wrong with violet?
World development: Pretty good using a VR technology to cultivate their strength for survival from the haze.
The story is interesting and the process of things is neat. I find it a little bleh seeing everyone keeps asking MC for help. I mean after all they all just started the game. I'm looking forward to his final evolve and how his friends/team mates beasts come along.
Hello guys!! Not really good at this but trust me, you can't find a line as interesting as this. This novel is all full of suspense, emotions and whatever you may imagine. It is a typical mind blowing novel, one that keeps you glued to your chairs. Am all open to critics, endeavour to drop your comments to help me serve you better.