Hawk9970
STOP looking for another novel! this is it, the high tier piece of work that is so rare to find nowadays. the author is defintely not an amateur but a seasoned professional. you will not rest until you are done reading all 350 chapters. and you will want MORE. so many twists and character deepness is hard to come by. just try it
Keep it up dude. Im really enjoying the book so far
Great novel plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz continue plz
It's a great novel that different from other.. i know the beginning is like MVS.. but everythink is like mvs nowadays tbh ahaha. Please give it a chance and you wont regret it.
Plus i like the difference. For example mc is a cute and little brother type, it was my first time seeing a mc like this. Idk but it was quite refreshing for me.
Author is a kind person, and always can chat with. There is a discord server. So dont forget to join there, we will be waiting~!
Well, after reading my review until here, why are you still here and go read ahah~~!
Hello, Eshwar here, it is officially chapter 200!!! Yay!! When I started I didn't think much about my novel, now I have come to love it and it is my second millstone!! All of the interactions have helped me a ton, though I don't know how to say anything else except thank you, and again my head is filled with spoilers so let me know how the novel is please, then until next time [Peace]
Thank you for reading.
Thank you for all the comments, you may not know but they have helped me a lot to continue writing, so again thank you very much.
Sorry guys, ive decided to stop.launching chapters after 30 because im starting to get bored and letting myself relax. After all ive only just gotten into a polytechnic recently. Besides, if u guys really want to read the novel then just go check it out on novelupdates.com. Fun Fact: I released chapters as a silent attempt against my parents who wanted me to study.
I have been searching for good basketball novels for quite a while. This novel just made my top 3 favorite basketball novels.
A really great book with lots of mystery and world building.
Writing Quality: In the beginning everything was easy to read. But in the later chapters, the writing quality seems to drop. Wrong words/spellings, bad grammar.
Story Development: In the beginning we know very little of world and follow the MC in his journey. He struggles a lot and learn through hard work and a little bit of help her and there. As he journeys in this new world he learns many things and grows. His current goal is to meet his wife, so he has to work hard in order to accomplish that.
Character Design: The MC has multiple names, due to his past, but finds out his true name in this new world. He is calculative, hard working, studious, laid back, and willing to put in a lot of effort to accomplish his goal. We meet other characters in this new world and they each have their own struggles and powers. We meet his wife as she progresses in here own journey in the world.
Update Stability: Just caught up with all the chapters. So don't know the schedule.
World Background: World is quite unique. Everyone brought to the world goes through a unique realm/test; white/green, yellow, red, black, based on the person's life. The MCisnt the first person in the world, nor is he the last. Everyone gets an island and their journey begins.
el mc es poseido por una succubus, se vuelve gay y va en busca de hombres.
The story is very good and beautifulAnd then every chapter I am waiting for the next one
I ve read all chapters so far. And now I want to do a good review.Shortly, this mc has fire root and developing & earning money from alchemy job. But somehow using the money (spirit stones) for cultivation is purer way than using pills and elixirs. Using elixirs gave people less progress than 1 spirit coin. And the elixirs prices go from 5 to 50 spirit coins. Hmm and this guy is probably best alchemist under Elders who got foundation established level cultivation. and he doesnt even use his pills for cultivating. So annoying how author didnt even give an idea about using own pills. Mc lvl ups every 3 to 6 years and there are no friends. close door cultivation. somehow he requires some spirit coins to level up faster, so he goes out for selling pills and getting money. Whatever I wrote here is all the story how goes. If you want to read / follow the process up to you. Byeee
it is a really good story you should add much more chapters though it has good potential
