worst novel that ever existed here, humans are equal to robots and within 2 days he says he "loves" his parents and says he will protect them until the end, a person from the land who is 20 years old within 2 days said he loves 2 strangers and calls them father and mother ... example: you reincarnate in another world and this happens, you take the body of a family and everything, gain your memories not feelings "MENMORIAS" NOT FEELINGS, and you are healthy conscience within days, not hours says you love two strangers ... just say don't read this.
You writing a new novel??!!! Then what about 'A warrior's path'? Will we still get updates??!!! Need answers.
Gooddamng 140 characters rule!!!
I love the concept of this book and it has a lot of potentials. I noticed the first chapter has quite a number of punctuation errors and the dialogues were barely spaced. The author should work on this as it'll help the readers flow better with the book. It gets much better as you read on. Keep up the good work!❤?
Muito bom não e cliché a história está realmente interessante estou empolgado pelo que está por vimSem palavras sem uma oportunidade para essa nova história vão se surpreende
5* Translation: No problems noticed.5* Updates: 60 chapters in a row! ( I know trial read, unless picked no more chaps) So just 5 stars for that4* Story: It feels rather rushed to me on how fast the develop. I think not even 2 weeks has passed and the mc and others are already rather strong to some extend. They got promoted and strong way to quick for only 2 weeks passed.3* char: Your typical average Chinese MC. Quick to anger and ''ruthless'' to some extend but nice towards allies. Oportunistic and incredibly lucky. Also much wow and who that from random lord 474 of xxx country.3* Background: The world is 10x as big as earth! Too bad you only know a little about the surrounding area of a village. The world is huge and a lot of different countries but you don't hear much of it. Unless it's some powerful lord of a country that takes interest in the rise of the MC. (Even then not much explained)4* Score: So yeah summed up a 4 star. I've enjoyed it so far but if it turns into something like world online or lord (something with that ring) then i'll stop reading. The novels are somewhat similar but this one has shown less favorism so far. Story is somewhat fast paced and the fight scenes are MEH. Stil an enjoyable read for those who like army building or city building. Just don't expect the novel to go too in depth or focus on it. (Atleast i doubt they wil from what i've read)
Yeah it’s pretty good
This is so cool! This is the story that I'll be rooting for until the end. I really love the simple details that I think the author had written with thorough research. For the author, good job on making the characters so badass that I remember the films I repeatedly watching.
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A terrible piece of garbage in a dumpster full of radioactive horse ****. To write something so awful is to commit a crime, and to enjoy this ****-soup is being an accomplice to one of the worst thought-crimes I've ever encountered in literature. If it were possible to give a negative rating I would have done so, and if you give this fucking travesty more than 1 star overall, you are objectively wrong.
Honestly one of the best novels i have read, its really fun to read and is almost guaranteed to get you to laugh, not to mention it's one of them boom you weirdly wanna read more of so overall 5 stars lol
I like what's going on with the setting presented in this story. The world is being shown to us via scenes and proper narration as instead of a giant info dump or in some cases, every aspect of the world being presented in the auxilary volume (like a guide). This novel is a good example of how a world should be shown. It's okay if some parts of the world are being told to us, the reader, but it's best to let the rest of the setting be shown to the reader for painting the picture in their minds. There's only two aspects of this novel I have an issue with: some paragraphs are quite big and massive, so it's best to cut them down especially for mobile readers. There's also the updating. I understand if the author has a lot going on other than writing this story, but if I may recommend, it's best to stockpile on google docs; write and edit the chapters, that way if you want to say, upload a chapter a day, it'll be easier. Stories and their respective chapters take time, and you author, have the basis of a good story. I just hope your schedule is managed especially for the readers who have given your novel positive reviews. Good luck.