Hawk9970
Awesome story so far man. Pls continue. Can't stop thinking about how it will end.
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Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email [email protected]. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Lies were told, then it will shatter your trust. This book will bring you on the edge. It has a nice plot. So unique. Great character. Good job for the writer. Two thumbs up.
Hands down one of the best World Building I've ever seen. The plot is amazing, and you are making me want to improve overall as a writer. Hope you continue because I added this to my library so I am looking forward to it!
Original but boring. Things I liked: The MC is basically an in-game scholar which is a cool new take that I wish had more play. Their family owns the game in addition to a bunch of other cool sci-fi related products/labs which is both an interesting character background and could wow the reader with ideas about the future. (Unfortunately, so far it is way underused) The world is a mix of different cultures from around the world and throughout history which hopefully means breaking away from East Asia/Europe (which is the generic setting for many of these). The fights are interesting and well done. The downsides: All of this sounds amazing but the delivery just felt flat to me. The only two cool sci-fi things actually mentioned are the video game and something to generate energy. The world feels modern rather than futuristic because of this. The family isn't interesting. Nothing wrong with that IRL but in a story it means that the chapters with the father drag due to a lack of interest. The sister is so in and out that she isn't much of a character. Again it makes sense why this would be IRL but in a story we need characters that grow and are interesting. There are glimmers of this with the MC's schoolmates and the former rankers in game but they aren't given enough time/enough of a spotlight to develop into anything. The game story is really slow. I don't really care about him doing a quest that everyone else has to do, just slightly quicker. The ghost sub plot is great but is buried under ... an escort quest that he takes for ??? reasons? The quest to gain Gaia's interest was cool too but the rewards were uninteresting. Ultimately his rewards are bland (50 chapters in and there is nothing that stands out), his actions are uninspired (there are no cool finding hidden treasures or bosses, just knowing how to get a base class), and when he does get interesting quests he either ignores them (he ignores the ghost until he can't anymore) or declines them (The oracle's epic quest). When the author mentioned the world was a mix of ours, I was hoping for a hybrid and therefore new culture. Not just a copy paste of cultures in different places, and those places are just European ones we have all seen before. Verdict: Worth a read to see if it is for you. The author may well be on to something eventually but I'm not willing to slog through more chapters to get to 'the good stuff'.
I love the way that author wrote, the plot and the Character is so perfect. .. I really enjoyed to read this story. I feel like my spirit soul will be happy too???
Couldn't find the translation for this novel so it may be an original but the concept is so overdone on Chinese webnovel sites that you can find several of them with the same premise, execution, theme . For anyone who wants to, just put 年 (meaning year) on the faloo.com's search engine and you can find dozens of novels that have concepts of someone going to another world and staying absolutely lowkey till he's gotten so powerful that nothing in the world can stop them.
This novel is very good story and very hard to find. I was lucky to accidentally find it. ?#PositiveReview#SupportTranslator#SpecialReader#FinishTheBook#DontHiatus#GoodBook#HighQualityTranslationFollow my Tiktok : @douyin_land
This is a well-written story! After I read chapter 1, I'm hooked! So I continue reading until chapter 5. Again, I am captivated by the character development and the author's well-written scenarios of what's going on.This might be the second MMRPG genre novel I have read so far, and it's good! I will not get bored waiting for updates since it has 90+ chapters already. Kudos to you! I love it.
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